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Published: 2004-03-04 23:25:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 27
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please tell me this is not happeningtell me this cannot be
tell me that everything has not gone all wrong
it was hard enough
to be enough
to give enough
to love you..
please tell me you will be by my side
tell me that our love wont die
please whisper that you love me
i wish i could
wish i would
i wish that you could be here while i cry
promise that this will all fade
these scars that this love has made
have taken all my breath away
promise you will be here with me and say
... everything's gonna be better now...
giving up
we said we would not.. give.. up..
were giving up
but i still believe
i wish youd just...
tell...
me...
that everything's gonna be better now...
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Comments: 9
loona-starr [2004-03-20 04:14:57 +0000 UTC]
I hate you. Your writeing is Awsome. Naw I dont hate you. I just wish my writeing was as heart impacting as yours. So from one writer to another...I congradulate thee.
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loona-starr In reply to loona-starr [2004-03-20 04:28:03 +0000 UTC]
De Nada, One with your talent deserves more then a simple compliment from a 14 y/o stranger. but thats all you can get from me. so yeah.
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Your welcome
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awesomesauce In reply to loona-starr [2004-03-20 04:24:58 +0000 UTC]
:smile: im flattered.. thank you
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Srfgurl5 [2004-03-11 16:46:43 +0000 UTC]
everything's gonna be better now...
I wish someone could tell me that.........but words mean nothing.......cause everything well never get better until we r dead...........
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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-03-11 17:14:36 +0000 UTC]
awwww.. u sed it... ... life is death and love is life. so in loving we die...
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