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awesomesauce — streams on a teary eyed face
Published: 2004-04-02 19:42:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 254; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 26
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Description why does it feel so good
to let these tears fall down my face
trickling down slowly
leaving their salty, cold trails
feeling the breeze of the wind
chill the streams that lie on my numb face
the relief of feeling them run off my cheek
not knowing where they fall
to let them drip to my lips
and taste their beautiful sorrow
hoping that this mid-winter's chill
doesn't freeze their paths to my flesh
and wishing this dry summer's heat
doesn't make tham dry up into powdery memories
   humans are the only creatures who cry tears or sadness
   i am the only one who cried with tears of inhumanity
forsaking my brethren
   and letting them fall
      to the ground...
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Comments: 29

InMyOwnWorld [2004-05-02 17:55:32 +0000 UTC]

im going to add to this mound of comments.... that is one of the best poems i've read ...i love it ! it's definetly goin on my fav list....it's coming from a perspective that i've never looked at...



~stupid people do stupid things but so do smart people~

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awesomesauce In reply to InMyOwnWorld [2004-05-03 18:04:58 +0000 UTC]

really1?!?!!? wow. im honorerd. thank you so much!

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InMyOwnWorld In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-03 23:49:23 +0000 UTC]

you should be take a few bows... x2

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awesomesauce In reply to InMyOwnWorld [2004-05-04 15:46:24 +0000 UTC]

hahaha.. ya rite..

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lovelorn [2004-04-20 15:11:09 +0000 UTC]

why were you crying adam?

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-04-21 18:02:56 +0000 UTC]

BOYS CAN CRY TOO!!! .. lol

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Srfgurl5 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-22 06:19:53 +0000 UTC]

bahhahahah

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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-04-22 17:33:28 +0000 UTC]

!??!

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caramelPoet [2004-04-08 03:07:48 +0000 UTC]

That's rawther nice.

Heather

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awesomesauce In reply to caramelPoet [2004-04-08 22:58:05 +0000 UTC]

thnx

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lucidpoetress [2004-04-06 23:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Great imagery.

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awesomesauce In reply to lucidpoetress [2004-04-08 22:55:04 +0000 UTC]

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moretolifethanthis [2004-04-04 04:29:09 +0000 UTC]

good job my son!

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awesomesauce In reply to moretolifethanthis [2004-04-05 15:29:52 +0000 UTC]

yessa mi ninja massa, thnk ya

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aperfectfailure [2004-04-03 19:25:20 +0000 UTC]

i love it, its beautiful!! it leaves a picture hanging in your mind when you read it! i love the last few lines... " humans are the only creatures who cry tears or sadness
i am the only one who cried with tears of inhumanity
forsaking my brethren" powerful!! great work!!

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awesomesauce In reply to aperfectfailure [2004-04-04 02:56:52 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks

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n00m [2004-04-03 07:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Crying is great. Emotions are fun when you think about it.

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awesomesauce In reply to n00m [2004-04-04 02:57:10 +0000 UTC]

thats y im emo

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Srfgurl5 [2004-04-02 22:40:03 +0000 UTC]

OMG ADAM......LAST NIGHT I WROTE SOMETHING ALMOST EXACTLY LIKE THIS.......THATS SO WEIRD........o dear.....myne was almost just like that.........ok well urs is very good bravo bravo bravo goodjob I am still in shock

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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-04-04 02:57:49 +0000 UTC]

awww
youre wonderful hahahah
yeah well im sure urs is better

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Srfgurl5 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-04 07:17:56 +0000 UTC]

no no urs is much better......*bravo*

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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-04-05 15:30:14 +0000 UTC]

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Cheesewoman [2004-04-02 20:37:20 +0000 UTC]

awww...its beautiful:licks:...and so are you!!!





I love you!!!

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awesomesauce In reply to Cheesewoman [2004-04-04 02:59:17 +0000 UTC]

...: thanks...

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EmoHeartBleeds [2004-04-02 20:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Thats great!

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awesomesauce In reply to EmoHeartBleeds [2004-04-04 02:59:33 +0000 UTC]

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celesteeve [2004-04-02 20:20:03 +0000 UTC]

this...is..the most beatifull ive rewad sice ive been here.thank u.it is truly a nother wonder in my life.

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awesomesauce In reply to celesteeve [2004-04-04 02:51:56 +0000 UTC]

youre too sweet. im not so sure your correct but thank you for feeling that way

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celesteeve In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-05 01:13:26 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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