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awesomesauce — the end of tonight's fantasy
Published: 2004-08-25 07:51:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description believe it or not
the story must end
the pages turned over
corners bent over, backwards
plot unfold

are you sorry yet?
this story of old
cliche at heart
earnest in mind
while we sat there staring
holding in our hands

apart from ourselves
we wait to silence
hanging in the balance
foretold by my demise

come back, my heart
reassure these hands
id kiss you tonight
if i knew...

you
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awesomesauce - arm+finger - foot+toe
Comments: 20

devur [2004-09-09 23:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Stunningly amazing.

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Srfgurl5 [2004-09-02 04:07:00 +0000 UTC]

I miss your hair haha and your arms

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lovelorn [2004-08-26 06:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Reading your poetry always depresses me.

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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-08-27 06:31:04 +0000 UTC]

meeeeeeeeeee 2

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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-08-28 05:12:24 +0000 UTC]

You should really get an avatar... of a girl on a suf board catching a wave... oooo and the # 5 should be on the board it works!

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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-08-28 06:55:52 +0000 UTC]

hahaha no actually I want one of a dead cat, possibly, OR A COFFEE CUP!

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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-08-28 06:58:44 +0000 UTC]

A dead cat?...uhhhh... riiiiight... are you insane?

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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-08-28 06:59:26 +0000 UTC]

um, maybe just a little

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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-08-28 07:01:26 +0000 UTC]

ok... just as long as we're clear on that.

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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-08-28 07:03:31 +0000 UTC]

lolol hahaha WE R LONGATEING ADAM'S COMMENTS ON HIS POEM SITE THING MUAHAHHA
sorry, I am a little...insane, like I said, but u and your work is just fantasticly fabuliously great

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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-08-28 07:06:46 +0000 UTC]

I like to clog adams page... he deserves it. Why do you always try to flatter me?

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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-08-28 07:10:39 +0000 UTC]

cause EVERYONE EVERYWHERE DESERVES TO BE FLATTERED BECAUSE THEY LIVE THROUGH THIS GROTEST GROSS GROSSERIE LIFE AND LIFESTYLESES, THEY PUT UP WITH THE SYSTEM WHICH I AM ON THE VERGE OF DESTROYING TO LET EVERY LITTLE POOR SOUL FREE FROM THIS HELL CALLED EARTH!

not really, I am just in a good mood, other then that, if I wasnt in a good mood, I would b telling everyone 2 die, or drink some epicac, or run into a wall
I am just hyper,or something that resembles hyperness.................DON DON DOOOON

AND haha I forgot it was us who clogged Adam's site last time, nice 2 work with u again

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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-08-28 07:15:00 +0000 UTC]

We are the infamous page clogging duo! Bwahahahaha

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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-08-28 07:16:58 +0000 UTC]

mauauauahahahah good job *high five* but now the time has come for me 2 go fold some laugndry, but have the most awesome night/morning WOOPDEEDOO and farthy well

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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-08-28 07:18:46 +0000 UTC]

yeah me too adams gunna yell at us...*sigh*

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Srfgurl5 [2004-08-26 01:07:30 +0000 UTC]

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girlwithabrokenheart [2004-08-25 18:24:48 +0000 UTC]

whoa....
its beautiful

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aperfectfailure [2004-08-25 18:00:36 +0000 UTC]

i really like this, u took a cliche i dea and made it interesting to read and beautiful... great job... the last stanza is my fav... its just incredibly beautiful

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dgabriele [2004-08-25 12:24:05 +0000 UTC]

aww... that is beautiful.. as always, whenever I'm sad I read your work and it makes me feel better.. good job.. great emotions

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wondrwomn [2004-08-25 08:16:21 +0000 UTC]

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