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awesomesauce — the great comuppance
Published: 2005-02-07 01:11:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description postbox revisited
an envelope resealed
bring back those chillings
the heat of those pangs
to and fro my eyes do flutter
reading those lines alreaddy memorized
finding every unnoticed mark and dimple
such foreign things i find everytime

your hand i see writing
but the pen insignificant
your fingers connect your heart
to this boy you lace them with

tragic story has reached its comuppance
the plaigarizers have met their match
no one knows this story like its characters
like i know my love outside my own heart is not shared
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Comments: 3

girlwithabrokenheart [2005-02-08 00:30:37 +0000 UTC]

"your fingers connect your heart
to this boy you lace them with"

... *sighs* you're an amazing writer.

this poem... is too true...

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awesomesauce In reply to girlwithabrokenheart [2005-02-10 19:42:28 +0000 UTC]

:smile:
thnx

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lipsxeyesxback [2005-02-07 21:05:20 +0000 UTC]

This one makes me want to cry.












its so true...

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