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awesomesauce — the speed of this moment
Published: 2004-07-19 22:32:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description this speed blinding
   the sights before me
and i lose focus
   coming in and out of focus
quietly i contemplate
   beauty and perfection
but this spinning is overwhelming
   and she smiles
      and the world stops
the axis on which our waltz
    the one we never started
  is finished in one final blow

undeserving of this moment
barely comprehending this prize
far away the earth stopped spinning
and in her fast eyes... i see
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awesomesauce - arm+finger - foot+toe
Comments: 8

Srfgurl5 [2004-07-20 07:01:58 +0000 UTC]

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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-07-20 17:02:01 +0000 UTC]

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lipsxeyesxback [2004-07-19 22:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Mm....your such a wonderful writer, its to good to be true.

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awesomesauce In reply to lipsxeyesxback [2004-07-20 16:58:37 +0000 UTC]

no... its too true to be good..

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lipsxeyesxback In reply to awesomesauce [2004-07-21 14:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Heh....*smiles*

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FrillzNpillz [2004-07-19 22:34:12 +0000 UTC]

fuckin great writing...Brings back some memories, for sure.

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awesomesauce In reply to FrillzNpillz [2004-07-20 16:57:50 +0000 UTC]

wow... not only is it great.. but its f****** great... im honored

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FrillzNpillz In reply to awesomesauce [2004-07-21 00:08:59 +0000 UTC]

You should be...Sorry, fuck is my favorite word.

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