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awesomesauce — this love
Published: 2004-01-16 04:13:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 26
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Description I love you like i need you yesterday
more than today, more than forever
for today could not be enough,
forever would never be enough
for my love of you

this day spent thinking of you
seems like a year with a thousand sleepless nights
one dream of kissing your lips
is like living and dying, breathing and flying
for you

this heart is like a heaven of birds
sing and flutering for you
this life would be like heaven on earth
if you felt the same as i do
and you do

I love you like i need you yesterday
more than today, more than forever
for today could not be enough,
forever would never be enough
for my love of you

many miles would i go
to trek through thorns
and glass and fire with no shoes
just for on beautiful kiss
all my life would i spend for you
if only to be with you

our love, it reaches to the heavens
our hearts entwined
not a soul could stop this beautiful love of ours
all spare yours and mine
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Comments: 15

celesteeve [2004-01-31 04:21:39 +0000 UTC]

um......wow that was beatiful.almost cried.i think it is great.

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unmendedblacktangled [2004-01-29 00:13:55 +0000 UTC]

kickass

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devur [2004-01-28 17:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem...I like the ideas behind it. Though, it didn't seem like the last stanza fit with the rest of it. *scratches head* Whatever, still a great poem.

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awesomesauce In reply to devur [2004-01-29 00:23:07 +0000 UTC]

hehe, it was ment to give it atwist... bt i will not reveal itm meaning at least not here...

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endofeternity [2004-01-25 02:25:16 +0000 UTC]

awww this is so sweet. I wish I was reading it with the right flow though cause I don't think I did...oh well. Still very good.

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endofeternity In reply to endofeternity [2004-01-25 02:26:54 +0000 UTC]

Wait- out of curiousity- has she seen these??

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anglphyre [2004-01-21 20:55:24 +0000 UTC]

i really like it... would you mind if i used ot in a piece of artwork, somehow? WITH PRPOPER sorry... capslock... with pproper erg... word...what's the word... recognition? yeah, recognition... could i?

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awesomesauce In reply to anglphyre [2004-01-21 22:31:12 +0000 UTC]

sure can

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PixieDustFlys [2004-01-16 21:46:09 +0000 UTC]

*tear* *sniffle*

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lipsxeyesxback [2004-01-16 15:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Awww thats so beautiful adam! I'm so glad to hear that your happy!

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theeaseofrain [2004-01-16 13:19:19 +0000 UTC]

last line is my fav.

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dewintheair [2004-01-16 10:03:47 +0000 UTC]

This is so very beautiful. And very well written.Great stuff

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BreathlessAngel [2004-01-16 04:42:42 +0000 UTC]

thats awesome nicely said

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BreathlessAngel [2004-01-16 04:42:07 +0000 UTC]

thats awesome nicely said

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BreathlessAngel [2004-01-16 04:40:42 +0000 UTC]

thats awesome nicely said

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