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awesomesauce — unexpect consequence of action
Published: 2004-10-28 22:07:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description this is the way i say, "i told you so"
this is the way i say, "how dare you"
this is the way i say, "you were wrong"

with my arms around you
and your head on my shoulder
and your shoulder to my cheek

i can feel the breaths you dont deserve to breathe
and somehow
we breathe at the same time
complimenting the others rising and falling shoulders
inhale
         and exhale
supplement on the edge of a sigh
and the beginning of convulsion

we're shaking because we looked in the mirror
and saw something we didnt like
having always been looking into it
taking advantage of the day we had

now the day has gone
the damage done
the veil rent in two
the earth shaken
and the rocks cry out
because nobody would

beauty will come

im sorry for sorrow
and im forgiving forgiveness
and hating love
wanting independence
from myself

but now the road has been taken
and the could of dust
that was once at your heels
is tangling in your hair
and clogging your airways
and tearing your eyes
and you cry harder

with the adrenaline gone
your heels are bleeding
and lungs collapse
asthmatic panting

you ran around
the world backwards
just to get here
when all you had to do
was look ahead
and step twice

i laid my coat down
for you my lady
over the puddle
of an ocean that was far too grand
but somehow it floated there
waiting for you
knowing it could take it
knowing you would stand this way

but you turned back
and spun the globe with your feet
and didnt let me help you
walk on water

avoiding my chivalry
you realise now it was a pace away

im sorry for this embrace
that braces us together

together in our sorrow
and creation of regret

this is how i say i told you so
this is how i say i wish i wasnt right
im sorry for the sins that youve created
ignoring still, the sins of mine

im sorry
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Comments: 12

ViolaBell [2004-11-02 01:31:59 +0000 UTC]

"i laid my coat down
for you my lady
over the puddle
of an ocean that was far too grand
but somehow it floated there
waiting for you
knowing it could take it
knowing you would stand this way"

I love this dude, I can picture the look in someone's face, just all hurt and bitter inside saying this

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awesomesauce In reply to ViolaBell [2004-11-02 07:20:39 +0000 UTC]

:smile:
then it has served its purpose
thanx for the comment

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ViolaBell In reply to awesomesauce [2004-11-05 23:00:24 +0000 UTC]

no problem dude

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lovelorn [2004-10-30 06:51:08 +0000 UTC]

i can feel the breaths you dont deserve to breathe
and somehow
we breathe at the same time
complimenting the others rising and falling shoulders
inhale
and exhale
supplement on the edge of a sigh
and the beginning of convulsion



He has done it again.

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-10-30 07:29:53 +0000 UTC]

done what???

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lovelorn In reply to awesomesauce [2004-10-30 09:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Wrote another poem.

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-10-30 19:43:23 +0000 UTC]

lol... how... observant

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Pertevivro [2004-10-29 01:49:32 +0000 UTC]

wow adam....thats great...i love the beginning...

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girlwithabrokenheart [2004-10-28 23:24:33 +0000 UTC]

wow. *wide eyes* this is an amazing piece Adam... oh goodness

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Srfgurl5 [2004-10-28 23:07:16 +0000 UTC]

adam this is really really really good....

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urnightmare [2004-10-28 22:58:56 +0000 UTC]

This is good, a bit long, I think you could make at least two poems out of this.

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awesomesauce In reply to urnightmare [2004-10-29 04:11:05 +0000 UTC]

i was tempted too but that would require double trials of DA's unmerciful submission process...

i might...

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