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Published: 2016-12-25 10:16:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 810; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 0
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Drawed this a week ago, didn't upload it because it was supposed to be a gift but, since there was some trouble it doesn't matter anymore anyway xD

So, this was the first 'more detailed' fur practice i made. c:

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SlytherclawPadawan [2016-12-28 17:36:42 +0000 UTC]

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Wow I almost don’t know what to say.. that’s one cool finished artwork. O.o But I’ll be happily giving a thought or two. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>

Since you said in the art description is more of a technique practice I wont dwell much on the background (or lack thereof). Obviously the first thing that would catch one’s eyes would be the fur. I’d say there’s a very-VERY nice flow in it. The color palette is very limited and that’s I suppose intentional due to the nature of the wolf’s fur. But that makes it even harder to paint without making the whole thing monotonous and boring, in this case I think you’ve achieved the high aesthetic value very well focusing on the variation of brush size and fur direction. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="60" title="Clap"/> It’s very enjoyable to look at each detail, one might love paying attention to them for minutes and more.

And it’s thorough of you not to neglect the whole elements of the drawing like the wolf’s proportion, shading, coloring (wow look at the nose!), perspective, facial expression, & background (not pure black, but somewhat brown which blends harmoniously with wolf’s shading) despite its main focus was the fur. There’s a great depth in the whole thing, the wolf seems to come out alive, not just a 2-dimensional painting. And the subtle stroke of white which probably indicating the wolf’s head motion looking up in rage (is it?) is an awesome nice touch. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="370" title=" (Cool)"/>

The glow on the eye is incredibly subtle but effective, but even more subtle is the electrifying effect surrounding it that would take a little more attention to catch – for this one I believe if you make it more obvious/bold/glowing intensity it would improve the wolf’s expression.

One other thing that I found a bit off though is the angle of the left ear. Is that really how wolf’s ear suppose to be when they howl? I don’t think it would be totally flat like that. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="18" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="108" title="Confused"/>

All in all you seem like an experienced illustrator (are you really 14?? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/o/o… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="555" title="Oh Noes!"/>) already but if you want some suggestions to improve then my 2 cents would be: pay more attention when drawing the wolf’s ear. Keep up the awesome work.


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PS: I’m here for Critmas 2016 Game with the spirit of constructive critique writing/commenting. This critique will be collected in my journal: Huntress On the Hunt! #1 Critmas 2016 . Come visit if you want. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>
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TheDARKenDRAGON999 [2017-02-18 04:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Epic

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Kittastica [2017-01-02 16:40:14 +0000 UTC]

you have a gift! youre an amazing artist specially for your age. the fur looks flawless! this is beautiful keep up the good work!!

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MoonPieWolf [2016-12-25 13:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow that's awesome

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Awkwardos In reply to MoonPieWolf [2016-12-25 15:32:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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NatNight9 [2016-12-25 11:19:06 +0000 UTC]

That's really awesome!

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Awkwardos In reply to NatNight9 [2016-12-25 11:22:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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NatNight9 In reply to Awkwardos [2016-12-25 12:05:52 +0000 UTC]

No problemo

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TheSatonic [2016-12-25 10:38:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh o.o  
Das fell ist echt genial gemacht und sieht so verdammt realistisch aus ;A;    ich wills streicheln xD  
Es ist echt wahnsinnig gut geworden,  ich weiß gar nicht was man da noch bemängeln könnte ;;  weiter so  <3

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Awkwardos In reply to TheSatonic [2016-12-25 10:49:58 +0000 UTC]

danke >u< <33333 hnnn ~schleimer~ xD <3

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TheSatonic In reply to Awkwardos [2016-12-25 11:04:36 +0000 UTC]

Nur die wahrheit!!!  xD <3

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DeathBoii [2016-12-25 10:20:10 +0000 UTC]

your art is really beautiful! 

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Awkwardos In reply to DeathBoii [2016-12-25 10:21:56 +0000 UTC]

That really means a lot to me <3 ;A; Thank you <3

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DeathBoii In reply to Awkwardos [2016-12-25 10:22:47 +0000 UTC]

no, really! :'D
it's just so pretty! hehe

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Awkwardos In reply to DeathBoii [2016-12-25 10:24:46 +0000 UTC]

hnnn <3 ;U;

well i love your art so it means even more to me <333 xD

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DeathBoii In reply to Awkwardos [2016-12-25 10:28:44 +0000 UTC]

aww you haha xD
you're really talented and you deserve more watchers ;v; 


I've always wanted to ask since you're really great at drawing animals
hehe have you ever tried drawing humans? :0 ( i would love to see that) because for me drawing animals is a bit difficult haha

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Awkwardos In reply to DeathBoii [2016-12-25 10:33:07 +0000 UTC]

<333 hnn

well i tried, but the anatomie is alway's difficult for me, at the moment i hardly can do the faces somehow but still problems with Hands and legs, oh lets just say the whole body x'D

I could show you a wip of a human OC ;u;

IT'S HORRIBLE xD Tho i can draw anthro's better then humans, because they have animal like aspects most of the time

alway's have less problems with the basic sketch  

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DeathBoii In reply to Awkwardos [2016-12-25 10:37:30 +0000 UTC]

hoooooi ;v;damn it still looks good!!! 
fjhjhhfhjhgjgfjgg!!! 


so, are you going to share this oc on DA? because i would love to know about him! :'D

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Awkwardos In reply to DeathBoii [2016-12-25 10:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Uhm well the hands and legs are pretty messed up, the sketch is one month old anyway so i guess i could try some humans once again hehe xD

uhhhm idk for me that drawing is embarrassing haha :'D He was created for a role play where i must draw the character by myself so idk if i will use him since the role play never started c:

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DeathBoii In reply to Awkwardos [2016-12-25 10:52:02 +0000 UTC]

oooo if so, you'd definitely do better! but still the sketch is great!  
hehe hope to see some human art from you :'D

idk if we ever talked before haha i was like
"i am watching this awesome artist faving their works..and i still haven't tried talking with them?" haha 

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Awkwardos In reply to DeathBoii [2016-12-25 10:54:25 +0000 UTC]

<3 hehe, i will try as soon as my grafic tablet works again :3 xD I would like to be able to draw humans :'D But i alway's mess up the anatomie so i never upload the human drawings tho c:

We don't talked much before, just simple replies

hhhhhnnn *-* Well i was honored when i saw you were watching me *A*

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DeathBoii In reply to Awkwardos [2016-12-25 11:04:30 +0000 UTC]

it was really nice talking to ya!
 hehe you're really talented! please continue what you're doing and keep it up! :'D

Hab einen schönen Tag!!! 

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Awkwardos In reply to DeathBoii [2016-12-25 11:14:36 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you tho *-*

*claps* xD

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