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Published: 2015-06-08 03:21:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 4368; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 79
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Description Alright everyone, I got a new Strip for you! This one is going to be a bit conversational since this is a based of somebody’s favorite characters. I just want to make this statement that I don’t have any personal biases with any of these characters. Each of them have their own personal views and experiences that they are expressing, which makes this an interesting topic for my readers to discuss one the comment section. Who do you think is right. Should Lady Maya take up on Princess Celestia’s offer or not. I really like to hear your opinions about this thus far. And yes, there is another half in this part, because I want to add a another character so I can close this part the way I want to. The second half want take too long to finish. Enjoy.

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The second part is finish now! Here's the Link: 
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Comments: 16

L-MASTER [2015-06-11 03:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Great! TT^TT

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Axel-Doi In reply to L-MASTER [2015-06-11 06:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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RK-Striker-JK-5 [2015-06-10 21:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Celestia, the sun never burned you as much as Maya did right there! Ooh, yeah!

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Axel-Doi In reply to RK-Striker-JK-5 [2015-06-11 03:43:52 +0000 UTC]

LOL! Best comment EVAH!!

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Lyra-senpai [2015-06-08 18:35:34 +0000 UTC]

poor celestia...     she is a kind, generous and lovely princess... 
I love her..   

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Axel-Doi In reply to Lyra-senpai [2015-06-08 20:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Now If feel bad about this...

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heathfiedler In reply to Axel-Doi [2015-09-09 05:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Well there is a point there i get she would want a perfect world for her kind but it does no good if  there is no conflict.. I mean yeah we could go without wars and stuff like that
but some arguing does good that way we can show one another what were doing wrong and to better out selves if we keep quite and just happy all the time then nothing
gets brought out. Celestia needs to rethink on how to handle things no everypony or person is going to be happy with what she does. Sombra didn't either, and drove himself
mad and turned on the sisters after while.. But anyways im still a bit confused on how their pony side comes out xD.

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Axel-Doi In reply to heathfiedler [2015-09-09 20:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Their pony counterpart are part of the Equestrian's spirit that manifested during.
Nightmare Moon's terror over a thousand years ago. They act as a counter-measure
to help the victim's of Nightmare Moon's nightmares from their psychosis. 

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heathfiedler In reply to Axel-Doi [2015-09-10 03:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh ok kinda like an alternate world to the all pony world. Ive been reading a fan fic that deals with other worlds like this though
the travelers are called mirror travelers.

I made one of my own sorta loosely based on that fic though the world he comes from is
simluar to what you have going though his world has no pony counterparts. How ever there is still magic there and what not. He has
been after his fathers fall spirit, who caused his princesses so many problems and he refuses to let it get away. Callos is Sombra's only
child and for awhile followed in his foot steps nearly to the point to where his father went mad. But after seeing what his father had
done to his own people and even turned on celestia and luna. He turned his back on his father saying there was no hope, even though
he had begged the two sisters to save his father but, as well all know sombra was far beyond any sort of help. Callos was also in love
with both princesses from a very young age because they were always kind and he thought they were the most beautiful women he
had ever seen. As he became older he chose to serve them after his fathers fall and since he had his fathers curse of vampirism which
made it to where he could feed off fear of others or blood luna made that part of him useful.
Celestia would of had an issue with it if Callos had used it on her ponies but he never did so because of his total devotion for both of them.
One night he had called the two to speak with and he spilled his heart to them telling them how he felt and it was something he had wanted
for a very long time, butthe two however kind they were felt it was just an infatuation he had and it was not really the sort of love he should feel for the two.
His heart was crushed by their kind words, he became bitter and heart broken.. he knew the two had loved his father even bedded
with him yet when he told him his feeling they push him away.. It hurt his heart but he couldn't bring himself to hate them for it so he
had left on a mission and never bothered to return and told a few of his minions if he didn't return in 5 hours to assume he was dead
and to send word to Celestia and mistress luna he was dead..  He had found out from a few cultist that his fathers fall spirit was very
alive and had been moving from world to world seeking power to ascend to a god like form so he could return and take out the two
women who ruined him..
Callos wouldn't have this and found Star swirl's staff that he had used to tap in to other realities like yours
which has counter parts for ponies or just ponies..  he followed his fathers magic signature and found each world his father visited
now had major issues because of it..  The problem with the staff was the crystal it used was far too weak to hold a stable portal for
very long and when he passed through the crystal normally broke so he would have to find a new one that was better suit so this
took awhile which sometimes caused problems because he looked so much like his father he was mistaken for him a few times.
Callos is a lonely person, bitter and hates his father, he just wishes the two princesses wouldn't have brushed him off so easy thinking
it was a silly crush and nothing more... but like they said loyalty can blind you but so can love which can hurt far more.

Anyways sorry i wrote so much i just had to get him out there.. Just felt maybe you might like who he is. n.n
I drew him in a pony form i might try a human form but honestly im horrible ad drawling xD
I really like your comic so far and wonder sometimes if callos might be able to fit in xD. But you got your
own story to tell so, ill leave it at that.

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VKrull [2015-06-08 07:38:38 +0000 UTC]

It got real deep in that mid section of the strip...and I agree with what was said on some levels regarding a perfect utopia.

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Axel-Doi In reply to VKrull [2015-06-08 16:44:32 +0000 UTC]

I see... What was some of the parts?

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kysoshadowblast [2015-06-08 04:15:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, this is intense o-o

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Axel-Doi In reply to kysoshadowblast [2015-06-08 04:35:26 +0000 UTC]

You have seen intense yet! It's going to get a whole lot more
in the future.

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kysoshadowblast In reply to Axel-Doi [2015-06-08 11:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's the reason I hate celestia and follow luna.

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StrandedGeek [2015-06-08 03:40:10 +0000 UTC]

Dang....she's got you there Tia.

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Axel-Doi In reply to StrandedGeek [2015-06-08 04:15:26 +0000 UTC]

I know right?

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