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ayanamifan β inking practice the second
Published: 2009-03-30 19:14:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 20069; Favourites: 293; Downloads: 722
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And part 2 of my inking training programAnother old sketch, but i played with some more patterns and brushes...
if anyone has some critique about the inking, please tell me ^^
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Really nice work, a powerful piece to say the least, would love to see it colored.
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Would she mind if i gave those muscular thighs of hers a big hug ? ;D
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Definately shows improvement in the shadowing.
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Holy sh.., she looks like a jagged piece of rock. Awesome.
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Excellent muscle detail and her abdominal area looks amazing!^^!
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Well it has been quite a while since i commented on any of your artwork and your very welcome.^^
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and your comments are welcome as always ^__^
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I feel destroyed. Your first two inked picture looks much better than all of mine
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Dont feel bad. They are not the first two. They are only the first two in which i invested a lot of time.
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I see.
Now this is a constructice comment
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thanks ^_^ glad you like it
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Those abs look like they were carved out of granite! Everything does for that matter!!!!
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I had some fun with the abs XD
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I certainly don't know how to fix it, but I notice that for a lot of budding inkers the face looks like it's drawn in a different style than the rest of the body after the inks are laid down, it happens to me when I try. Not just the "anime simplistic" vs a very well muscled woman but in line variety. If I could find a way to say "think of the eyes as muscles so you put the same effort on them" In far more artsy terms, I would.
That said she still looks very nice~
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ah i see... when the body is drawn with lot of anatomica details the face should show some more anatomical details as well... is it that what you wanted to say? XD
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No, no. You don't need more detail, certaily not hehe. I don't know if it's just me but your lines everywhere else on her body are so large, thick, (well drawn, don't mistake) that the abundance of tiny lines on the face in contrast (mouth, eyes, etc.) is a little off to me, as if it's the focus and not her awesome body simply because it's only prevalent in that one small section. I can see the thinner lines across her veins and the like but the face is at odds with the lines on the rest of her.
I dunno, maybe colored such a problem no longer exists, or it might just be me...
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aaah now i see what you mean ^^
Well je i noticed that earlier with my lines.
but the problem is that thin lines on the body make loose a lot of depth and thick lines on the face make the face look ugly
But thanks for the crit. Maybe i'll try to adjust that a bit.
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That was what i was aiming for... mission accomplished
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