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AztecTemplar — Absence Rains On Me
Published: 2011-12-12 02:12:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 720; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 7
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Description Dear sweet girl
I'll let it all out
Tonight...
Tonight...
As your absence rains on me
Like cutting knives
I'll let out my whole being

My heart empty
Cries for your soul
Longs for your heart
Begs for your touch
The drops from the sky
Rain drops of loneliness
Your absence rains on me

I can feel it deep
The words we said
The dreams we shared
As far fetched as they were
They gave me hope
My heart fluttered with you
And you made me feel...oh
Oh so good

Hearing melodies is not the same
Every day is not the same
We barely exchange words now
I would've traveled the world to see you
To reach you, to touch you, to please you
To make you happy
Everynight is empty
My phone rings no more with you
The sweetest smile I knew of yours
Etched only in dreams

Dear sweet girl
I do miss you so...
But you made your choice
One I was not a part of
And the sky rains on me it's pain
Your absence rains on me
And I've got no where to go
I've lost more than love

Through eternity and beyond
With rain or sunshine
I'll only seek your happiness always
Though I miss you sweet lady
Rain on me one last time
Rain on me...
Cuz I won't be here anymore.
Your absence will lead to mine.
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Comments: 61

AztecTemplar In reply to ??? [2011-12-15 04:15:50 +0000 UTC]

Awww hehe well then I portrayed the right emotion! YAY
haha awww though its sad, thank u very much!!!
Hehe Im so glad you liked it!

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andreaseesstarz In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-16 23:34:00 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome hect!

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AztecTemplar In reply to andreaseesstarz [2011-12-16 23:40:36 +0000 UTC]

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AmourRuse [2011-12-14 02:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness... I love this so much...
So much that part of it may become my facebook status pretty soon

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AztecTemplar In reply to AmourRuse [2011-12-14 02:51:22 +0000 UTC]

OMG wow this is such a sweet and amazing comment!!
Thank you sooo very much!!!!!!!!!!! <3
hehehe I cant wait to see it in ur FB hahhah FB makes it official XD lmao
Thank you so much, Im so happy! lol

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Phoneix-Faerie [2011-12-12 22:37:40 +0000 UTC]

very sad adn sweet

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AztecTemplar In reply to Phoneix-Faerie [2011-12-12 22:51:28 +0000 UTC]

aww hehe thank you.
it is indeed, it feels that way anyways hehe.
Thank youuu!
Glad you think so :3

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Phoneix-Faerie In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-12 23:00:02 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome Aww

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AztecTemplar In reply to Phoneix-Faerie [2011-12-12 23:02:46 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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LittleBlueRaven [2011-12-12 19:55:20 +0000 UTC]

sooo beautiful <3 .... just perfect <3

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AztecTemplar In reply to LittleBlueRaven [2011-12-12 22:50:54 +0000 UTC]

hahaha awwwwwwwwwwwwww thank you so much!! hehe
So happy you think so!
hehehe <3

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LittleBlueRaven In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-14 04:05:39 +0000 UTC]

of course i think so, youre stuff is amazing

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AztecTemplar In reply to LittleBlueRaven [2011-12-14 04:08:34 +0000 UTC]

hahaha just like urs silly haha :3

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LittleBlueRaven In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-15 03:47:24 +0000 UTC]

lol i didnt think mine was all that good, but whatever you say mister

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AztecTemplar In reply to LittleBlueRaven [2011-12-15 04:15:11 +0000 UTC]

hehehe well I like everything u do hahaha

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FlyHigh20 [2011-12-12 13:47:45 +0000 UTC]

all these sad love poems, they're not about you, right???

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AztecTemplar In reply to FlyHigh20 [2011-12-12 22:50:35 +0000 UTC]

hahaha they always are :3
Just not always talking about the present :3
hehe

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FlyHigh20 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-13 00:17:30 +0000 UTC]

okay. as long as you're feeling better.

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AztecTemplar In reply to FlyHigh20 [2011-12-13 00:17:52 +0000 UTC]

hehehe for sure :3

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FlyHigh20 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-13 00:19:45 +0000 UTC]



someone just gave me a 3 month premium membership!!!!

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AztecTemplar In reply to FlyHigh20 [2011-12-13 00:20:15 +0000 UTC]

OMG WOW AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEE

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FlyHigh20 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-13 00:22:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm soooooo excited!!! I don't even know what to do. I just finished a seven essay final and this just completely made my day.

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AztecTemplar In reply to FlyHigh20 [2011-12-13 00:25:12 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha XD
Its a nice reward huh? lol
Aww well Im happy for you!!

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FlyHigh20 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-13 00:26:26 +0000 UTC]

yeah it was a nice reward.

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AztecTemplar In reply to FlyHigh20 [2011-12-13 00:28:31 +0000 UTC]

hehehe aww well well deserved for sure buddy XD hehehe awesomenesssss :3

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FlyHigh20 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-13 19:02:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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AztecTemplar In reply to FlyHigh20 [2011-12-13 19:57:10 +0000 UTC]

:3

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FlyHigh20 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-13 19:59:10 +0000 UTC]

but what am I supposed to do with it??!!!

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AztecTemplar In reply to FlyHigh20 [2011-12-13 22:29:00 +0000 UTC]

ummmmmmmmmmmm make polls!! see who watches ur page!
Get more galleries on ur front page! lol

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From-Blank-Pages [2011-12-12 03:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Love it!! It was sweet and tender, I could feel the longing of the voice in my head as she read Keep up the awesome work!!!! Makes me miss my boyfriend... oh.... longing....

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AztecTemplar In reply to From-Blank-Pages [2011-12-12 03:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww hehehehee thank you so very much!!!
Yeah longing can suck, but it also tends to strengthen bonds :3
hehehe itll be okies!
Ty so much, Im so happy you like it!

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brooke1395 [2011-12-12 03:32:19 +0000 UTC]

ME GUSTA!(:

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AztecTemplar In reply to brooke1395 [2011-12-12 03:32:57 +0000 UTC]

GRACIAS

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brooke1395 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-12 03:34:33 +0000 UTC]

De nada mi Darling.(: Lol.

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AztecTemplar In reply to brooke1395 [2011-12-12 03:35:48 +0000 UTC]

XD yayz lols

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brooke1395 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-12 03:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Haha, You have your own folder in my Favorites now.(:

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AztecTemplar In reply to brooke1395 [2011-12-12 03:42:32 +0000 UTC]

YAYAYAYAYYA <3

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brooke1395 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-12 03:43:31 +0000 UTC]

(: I thought you'd like that.(:

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AztecTemplar In reply to brooke1395 [2011-12-12 03:43:47 +0000 UTC]

hhahahaha I love it XD

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brooke1395 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-12 03:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha.(:

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aslenderstring [2011-12-12 02:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful C:

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AztecTemplar In reply to aslenderstring [2011-12-12 02:36:02 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwww hehehe thank you so very much!
Glad you think so!
Means alot to me hehehe
WOW ty!

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aslenderstring In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-12 02:42:36 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! n_n

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AztecTemplar In reply to aslenderstring [2011-12-12 02:44:00 +0000 UTC]

:3

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Pourus-heart [2011-12-12 02:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is really cool.
Really cool visuals, aye.
So sad though, but yeah still its really amazing. ^-^
Good job!~

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AztecTemplar In reply to Pourus-heart [2011-12-12 02:25:49 +0000 UTC]

hhehe yep sadness rains on it XD
hehe thank you so very much. You know I love to convey strong visuals with words XD
THank youuu

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SammyVollmer6 [2011-12-12 02:24:12 +0000 UTC]

my goodness .. you leave me speachless .. i wish i was this good of a writer (:

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AztecTemplar In reply to SammyVollmer6 [2011-12-12 02:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha awww that's so cute!!
Thank youuuu!!!! I really appreciate that!
But not trueeee hehehe I know youre a better writer!!!

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SammyVollmer6 In reply to AztecTemplar [2011-12-12 02:49:05 +0000 UTC]

no your really good .. you should publish (:

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AztecTemplar In reply to SammyVollmer6 [2011-12-12 02:51:24 +0000 UTC]

awwwww hehe thank youuu wow you think so?
haha Ive been working on a couple novels for a while, but takes time to finish and find agent and stuff to publish :3 hehehe

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