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AztecTemplar — Cut Free
Published: 2011-12-06 05:25:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 505; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 6
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I can not see youThe pain rushing through me
I opened the door
You broke it down
1, 2, 3, kill me now
Oh
I feel it
The pain
Kill
This heart you broke
Shards, of utter love
Spread like daggers on my feet
Bleed...
The pool on which I swim
Let me drown within
Oh oh
The lake of red takes me
My new home
Why'd you play me?
Was I not enough
Why'd you lead me?
If you had your life with him
You played me like a doll
Strings
Cut them from my wrists
Let me be free from your twists
Lies upon sin upon greed
Smiles
Broken, untrue, lying
This heart only meant your happiness
Can you tell me
Why you drowned me?
Did you kiss me
While he swam in your heart?
This jagged heart means nothing
I'm walking on air
The space between us
Distance you set forth
You made your choice
Cut me free
I would've been your puppet forever
Now I roam free the lakes of oblivion
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Comments: 47
haha really? That's an awesome song XD
Though I rather used a Japanese song and Linkin Park for inspiration ahaha.
Still that's awesome!
Thankies! :3
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A combo of Numb and Forgotten.
They served more to fill the poem in, the main inspiration was the Japanese song lol
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interesting.....what is the Japanese song?
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XXX by L'arc~en~ciel
My favorite group of all time.
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haha always interesting ideas I suppose. XD
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No one really. I usually write poems that are a mix of present and past emotions, so it doesnt focus on any one person :3
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you have real talent, i tell you. this is so good! sad, but really really good!
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awww hehehe thank you so very much!
Im very glad you liked it :3
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awwwwwwwwwww haha you're very welcome haha
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lolz what for silly?
:3
Hope u feel bttr btw
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hah still a bit restless lol
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of course.
I just figured if u wanted to talk ud msg me lol
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haha... im really happy i had my friend with me.. even though she was in a different class... i ran out the room and she came after me lol
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hhehehe so cuteeee :3
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haha i hate it when she has to see me cry >.<
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awwww well good friends always get to see us cry.
Grr
I wouldve hugged ya lol
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she held me really tight while everyone else stared
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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lol im happy to have her and uuu!!!
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awwww hehehe yay and Im happy to have uuuu <3
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:3
u need to talk to me on FB more!!! XD
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