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Ah butts, I doggone joined another group :II had an unused character, Torie and so I decided to use him from PMDUnity because why not? I actually was a PMD-Explorers member, but I didn't particiapte much. Now with the fresh start of Unity, I can have a chance to start over. Instead of converting my old characters, I decided to make another team with Torie. I actually planned to join a few days ago, but I couldn't come up with a good history for the team and abandoned it.
Also, I'm planning to stick with Torie until he evolves into Ampharos, in fact, I already designed his evolutions and I really do want him to evolve. So yea~
TEAM INFO:
Team Name: Lost Lamb
No. of Members: 1
Members: Torie
Andalusst Atlas Link: pmdunity.org/team/view/659/los…
Participated Missions:
Mission 1 - N/A
Mission 2 - ???
Participated Tasks:
June Task - azurajae.deviantart.com/art/PM…
TEAM MEMBER #1
[ Info ]
Name: Torie [TO-ry]
Gender: Male
Age: Nineteen
Species: Mareep
Type:
Nature: Modest
Trait: Likes to Relax
Stage: Baby Stage (Unevolved)
Voice: Yuki Kaida (China, APH)
Theme: Aiyaa Four Thousand Years (Piano Version)
[ Appearance ]
Torie is a very feminine-looking Mareep. Others often mistake him for a girl upon first glance, which he finds fairly irritating. Torie takes good care of his fleece, making it look soft and poofy. He wears a baby pink and black patterned scarf, which he is seen almost always with.. On the orb on his tail, it is cracked due to being attacked by Reese.
Accessories:
- Pink Scarf: A simple woolly pink scarf. Nothing really special about it.
[ Personality ]
Modest | Insecure | Hard-working | Fashionista | Hobbyist
Torie is a fairly feminine for being a boy. He enjoys doing that normally girls would find interesting, like knitting or cooking, which are his favorite hobbies, but finds it annoying when someone mistakes him for one. Even so, he often wears light-colored clothing and in fact, hates dark colors, his favorite color being baby pink. Torie is also disciplined on hygiene, often times checking his fleece to make sure it's soft enough or taking frequent showers.. Despite so, he is very lazy when it comes to doing something he doesn't like to do, often procrastinating until the last minute, but in reality, he is very hard-working, especially when it comes to taking care of his siblings. Torie is willing to put himself on the line in order to keep his siblings going, but gets failed to get treated as an older sibling. Secretly, he is insecure about his position as the "oldest" of his siblings as well as working with other Pokemon, mostly because he feels that he is not fit to work with others. Although he seemingly hates his siblings, he in fact, loves them very much and spends his time
watching from a distance. Surprisingly, he is glad that his younger siblings live a better life than he does, but is jealous.
[ History ]
Torie lived as the oldest of six siblings. After thier mother died of a serious ailment and their father's disappearance, Torie took charge and cared for all his siblings. Since the age difference between Torie and Reese was only three years, Reese often accompanied Torie on his "missions", which in fact, mercenary missions which Torie is paid fairly poorly for. They lived in poverty for a total of five years and at one point, Reese began to get popularity as a really good fighter as the missions grew more and more dangerous. At one point in their life, they became so poor, Torie had to cut his fleece and sell it in order to make income. A wealthy family saw their suffering and pitied them, although they disapproved of Torie's methods of raising them, and seeing Reese as a potential bodyguard, they offer the position to him at the condition that they leave Torie behind because of his reputation as a mercenary and deeming him unable to redeem himself. Despite his pleas, Reese obliges and attacks Torie on one of their missions and reveals his intentions. He injuires Torie by breaking his tail-lightbulb and abandons Torie in the middle of their mission in the dungeon, almost killing him. Despite heavily objecting, Torie allows Reese to take the rest of his siblings, thinking that they were better off without him.
By the time Torie made it back to their hometown, Reese had already raided their home and taken everything with him, leaving Torie with almost nothing. Although soon managing to get his life started through donations given secretly by Rookie, who greatly objected Torie being left behind. Torie now lives a much better life as a Hunter, making a moderate amount of income, although he is almost disconnected in relations with his siblings, excluding meeting Rookie on ocassion or seeing Reese patrolling the estate. Torie hopes to one day reconcile with his siblings and has a dream that they will live together once again.
[ Family ]
- Reese - Lairon - Male - Reese is the second oldest of all the siblings. He is cool-headed and rarely shows his emotions. Despite this, he is kind to his siblings, greatly respecting Torie, secretly jealous of his responsibility towards them. He was the first to abandon Torie after they spiraled into poverty and was scouted as a bodyguard for a wealthy family. He quickly stripped all responsibility from Torie and took custody of all of his other siblings, leaving Torie behind. He currently lives a comfortable life in the wealthy family's estate with all of his siblings excluding Torie.
- Marie - Flaafy - Female - Marie is the third oldest sibling and the only girl in the family. Growing up around boys, she is fairly boyish and takes after Jack's personality, although is more expressive than her brother. She finds Torie's personality annoying, but is aware of his affection and effort to protect them. She willingly leaves with Reese to live with him at the estate and did not object that Torie did not go with them because of his reputation as a mercenary, although she worries for his safety. Marie frequently hires people to stalk Torie to make sure of his well being.
- Rookie - Aaron - Male - Rookie is the fourth sibling and the most hyperactive out of all of them. He adores Torie to the point where he tries to act like his older brother, but finds his girlish personality weird. Even so, he cares tremendously for his older sibling and was the only one to object leaving Torie behind when moving in with Reese, almost staying with Torie until Torie told him to go with Reese for his sake. Rookie frequently asks the whereabouts of Torie and often tries to look for his older brother when he has the time, sometimes even hanging out together in an alley. Because of this, Reese often busies him with work, trying to keep Rookie away from Torie. He currently lives with his siblings, excluding Torie, in the family's wealthy estate.
- Reiley and Aura - Male and Female (Twins) - Mareep and Mareep (Shiny) - Aura and Reiley are twin Mareeps who are notorious for getting into trouble. They are hyperactive, mostly hanging around their older brother Rookie. Like him, they admire Torie, but are too young understand why the oldest did not live with them in "paradise". They are afraid of Reese, but they respect him.
[ Relationships ]
TBA
[ Skills and Abilities ]
Skills > Fighting > Moves
Torie is an excellent fighter, although not succeeding his brother in battling. He prefers not to battle when there is a better option. He prefers not to get his fleece dirty (actually not to hurt other Pokemon) and rather negotiate as "civil Pokemon" to battling to the death, but will battle if there is no better option. Torie battles with a very aggressive hit-and-run tatic, dashing in to deal damage before sprinting away before the enemy can retaliate. His self-proclaimed "like strongest attack ever" is his egg move, Iron Tail, but using too often easily tires him out. Instead, Torie often resorts to using the much more better alternative, Electro Ball, which does not require him to use as much effort.
MOVES:
- Electro Ball - - Torie generates a large electric sphere and "tosses" it at the opponent. The longer Torie charges, the stronger and bigger the Electro Ball becomes.
- Thunder Wave - - Torie genearates a small electric pulse strong enough to paralyze the opponenet. Torie uses this as a defense mechanism or a plus in fighting.
- Take Down - - Torie charges and slams into the opponent, hurting himself in the process. Torie's Take Down is much more aggressive and powerfual than a regular Take Down, but he doesn't like to use it often. Torie will only use Take Down as a last resort or if there is no better option.
- Iron Tail (Egg Move) - - Torie hardens his tail and smacks/slices the target with the force of a speeding truck. The only problem with this move is that Torie is slower when his tail is hardened and Torie has fairly low accuracy using this.
Abilities > Ability > Static
Upon touching Torie, sometimes he generates a small electric pulse (similar to Thunder Wave, albeit weaker), that will sometimes paralyze the target. Often times, this skill is uncontrollable and will activate whenever someone hits Torie hard enough.
[ Trivia ]
- Torie sometimes speaks with a "valley girl accent", using words such as "like", "totally/totes", "fabulous/fab", and others, but he drops his accent when things get serious. The reason for this is to not to seem as a hostile individual and hopefully lighten the mood enough for him to make friends instead of enemies.
- Torie is a self-proclaimed "solo-hunter", refusing to partner up with other Pokemon, in fear that they will hurt him as Reese did.
- Did you know Torie's past is based of China's history/past in Hetalia: Axis Powers? A bit of his personality is taken from Poland (Character) as well.
- It is unknown why Torie is unable to evolve, but he thinks it's because he has unresolved conflicts and his bundled up emotions had taken the better of him and hindered his ability to evolve.
Team Member #2:
N/A
CONCEPT ARTWORK:
©
© Mareep Pokemon
© Hunters App by ChillySunDance
© Torie (Character) belongs to Mua
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Comments: 24
Buwaya [2014-06-28 23:54:47 +0000 UTC]
Please resubmit this application with the changes required into the Atlas.
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AzuraJae In reply to Buwaya [2014-06-29 12:14:37 +0000 UTC]
I just fixed the changes, although I'm a tad bit confused how to re-submit. Do I delete the team and make another one?
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AzuraJae In reply to Buwaya [2014-06-29 03:42:51 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, I've been a bit busy of the late >u<
I'll get it done later today with the requests I have to do :I
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Buwaya In reply to AzuraJae [2014-06-30 01:11:34 +0000 UTC]
Alright, take all the time you need.
In the Atlas, go to your team's logbook, delete submitted application, make a new one.
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Chobin-Hood [2014-06-02 17:31:03 +0000 UTC]
Heya! I'm afraid that since your team didn't complete the Mission 1 (and completed its bonus objective) that your scarf isn't able to be the chosen colors. You're able to choose a color upon obtaining the scarf, but without customization it's only allowed to be a single color.
I'll be rejecting your application from the Atlas for now, so please resubmit when you've made the change.
You still have the opportunity to get a customization from the first mission, as missions can be completed at any time, even late, but you also have the opportunity to get a customization ticket from the current task, assuming you would like it over the evolution voucher or the kunai.
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AzuraJae In reply to Chobin-Hood [2014-06-04 10:06:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh, alright, I'll change the colors later once I have time. I have to be studying of exams now and I have no time :V
You can do mission anytime? I didn't know that ^^" //improbablybeingabloodyilliterateagain
I really want that Evolution Permit from this Mission so I'll probably re-doing mission one to get the customization~
Thanks for letting me know, hun~
I'll fix it as soon as possible!
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Chobin-Hood In reply to AzuraJae [2014-06-05 01:24:57 +0000 UTC]
Alright, and study well!
But just to be perfectly clear, what's going on now is not a mission, but a task. You won't be able to go back and do tasks whenever you like, but you still do have plenty of time to work on it. So if you would like the evolution permit but feel like you could hold off on the customization voucher for a little while, I'd suggest doing the Task first.
And I'm terribly sorry, I thought I had hit submit before I left! This should have gotten to you much, much sooner.
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AzuraJae In reply to Chobin-Hood [2014-06-05 09:31:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you :3
Alright, I'll be sure to keep that tip in mind I'll fix up the app and work on Mission 1 after I finish the June Task. Thanks for clearing that bit up :/
It's alright, hun~
I was in school the entire day and I haven't logged in deviantArt today yet so don't worry about it.
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vudw [2014-05-01 17:23:14 +0000 UTC]
I like how you set up all the details for Torie here. He's a very interesting character, and has a lot of detail to him written down there as well. I'd like to look out for more. x3
Hopefully he's just as interesting to share for you~
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AzuraJae In reply to vudw [2014-05-02 00:11:04 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you, hun
He is very interesting for me to share, Torie is really my precious baby ;v;
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InlineMantine [2014-05-01 13:55:57 +0000 UTC]
Pink is indeed the manliest of colors. Better embrace it now for when he turns into a Flaffy, eh? That being said, there are a couple of things that need changing with this app:
> Your stat total is a bit off. First off, you have 11 basic points listed rather than the 10 which are legal. Take one away and you should be good.
> However, I see you haven't applied the +2 type bonus points yet. After doing the above adjustment, feel free to add two differently colored points into your Agility stat.
> The fraction below your stat represents the number of basic points that are left unused, so it should read "0/10" if you wish for it to be correct, even after applying the previously mentioned bonus points.
> You, at this point, cannot have two accessories; especially the bow as it is only free for the Researchers guild. You can keep the scarf, but the bow will have to wait until you can purchase it for 5 Star Coins later down the line. There IS a way to bypass this (which is by having another partner and transferring their free accessory to your first team member), but that goes against Torie's motives, here.
Make these changes as soon as you can, please!
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AzuraJae In reply to InlineMantine [2014-05-01 14:21:42 +0000 UTC]
Pink is indeed a manly color, I when I meet my boyfriend, his favorite color is pink |D
Oh dear, I seem to have messed some things up D:
I'll fix it up later, sweetie, thanks for telling me~
The ability stat thing is a bit confusing to be honest, thanks for clearing that up, hun. Actually the ability stat thing, the brighter pink is the bonus. You see that slightly brighter pink, is that how you use the bonus? In that case I need to add one bonus and change the color into something more opposite.
I'll purchase the bow later on, then. I'll keep Torie's scarf for now
Thank you for telling me these, honey, I'll change it as soon as I find time to.
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InlineMantine In reply to AzuraJae [2014-05-01 14:40:57 +0000 UTC]
That is indeed how bonuses work, so please get on that! Just tell me when you finish the changes so I can mark this one as done.
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InlineMantine In reply to AzuraJae [2014-05-02 14:09:29 +0000 UTC]
Cool! But the thing is when I said "+2 in your agility stat" I meant only in your agility stat since that's the only place where Electric types can get that bonus. Because they're speedy and whatnot. I'm afraid that extra point in Strength is invalid and you'll have to swap it with the second extra Agility point (that is to say Strength will have only its two pink points while Agility will have one pink point and two blue ones). Sorry!
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AzuraJae In reply to InlineMantine [2014-05-02 14:54:58 +0000 UTC]
Ve~ I'm causing so much trouble //cries
I think I fixed it now, darling~ I'm sorry I'm causing this much trouble ;-;
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InlineMantine In reply to AzuraJae [2014-05-02 15:27:52 +0000 UTC]
It's all good now! And really, it isn't any trouble. As long as it gets sorted, it's fine. |P
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AzuraJae In reply to InlineMantine [2014-05-02 15:40:29 +0000 UTC]
I feel like such a burden though, darling //cries
I make your job much more harder than it already is ;-;
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InlineMantine In reply to AzuraJae [2014-05-02 16:28:51 +0000 UTC]
No, seriously. It's not a problem. There's not much point to taking on the role of enforcing rules if you're going to stress out over doing said job, now is there? It's fine; I'm not upset in the slightest.
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AzuraJae In reply to InlineMantine [2014-05-03 04:48:07 +0000 UTC]
Alright, if you say so, hun~
I just feel a bit bad ;v;
Even if you say that, I'll try not to make your job harder ~
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AzuraJae In reply to InlineMantine [2014-05-01 15:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Alright, hun, I'll either note the group,comment on the front page, or reply again to this comment when I'm done; 'k, sweetie?
Thanks for all your help, darling
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