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Published: 2005-11-08 02:31:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description I left you griping my soul so I’d never leave you again,
My apologies seem to drift past your night sky,
As we both lay there costless in the wind,
Knowing nothing dare to isolate our melody.

Holding beneath my heartbeat as it lay in your clasp,
Reciting the repetition of my pulse,
The quiet beats of our song and how it faded,
Has drawn a tear upon your cheek.

Memorized at how many moments I relive that picture amongst my mind,
How remorse fills my words,
Yet my time awaited me at the entrance of my gate,
Coating every last memory in its separate world.

The library of dismay recites the words,
I left you gape with our crack,
That soon filled up with goodbyes,
Our scraps never seem retained.

Divided we are,
Split through every last corner you held,
My amplified world,
Against your agony by me.

My time was ready for me to open all boundaries,
To say it wasn’t meant, crumbles every last limit,
Hearing how I was put here to impact rather than serve,
Tears of my rainbow has blurred into a fog.

You lay there griping my soul,
Knowing I had already tarnished in our eyes,
We won’t loosen our clutch, just say it again,
Hold me close and tell me I’ll live within you for all and eternity.

By Bianca © 2005
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Comments: 14

Daiichi [2005-11-22 16:32:05 +0000 UTC]

I think one of the best things about this poem is that it runs along the same theme as a lot of others, but it has a positive ending..Things are justified when the one you love empowers you.. Good work.

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B-x0 In reply to Daiichi [2005-11-27 00:51:57 +0000 UTC]

: )) <33

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Disastercake [2005-11-09 02:46:17 +0000 UTC]

Tears of my rainbow has blurred into a fog.

LOVE that line! The whole poem is very thought provoking.

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B-x0 In reply to Disastercake [2005-11-09 03:21:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my dear<3

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moriloth [2005-11-09 01:20:19 +0000 UTC]

wow. this is amazing! each thing you write i like more and more

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B-x0 In reply to moriloth [2005-11-09 02:02:16 +0000 UTC]

Awwee, thank you! <333

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Coxmo [2005-11-08 16:23:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow yet another extremely amasing and deep, peice of art by Bianca. The way you stay on topic is great. Beautiful work on this one.

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B-x0 In reply to Coxmo [2005-11-08 20:48:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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zero-code [2005-11-08 05:04:12 +0000 UTC]

fucking amazing. i love this so much. found a typo though (or atleast i think it's a typo)

Memorized at how many moments a relive that picture amongst my mind,

do you mean: Memorized at how many moments I relive that picture amongst my mind,

i'm adding this as one of my favorites!

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B-x0 In reply to zero-code [2005-11-08 13:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Lol Yes you are right...ah, typo's gotta love em. I'll change that as soon as I can: )) Thank you my love<33

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zero-code In reply to B-x0 [2005-11-08 18:18:34 +0000 UTC]

anytime.

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Demitoriyani [2005-11-08 02:41:23 +0000 UTC]

"Hold me close and tell me I’ll live within you for all and eternity."

How very profound.

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B-x0 In reply to Demitoriyani [2005-11-08 02:43:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my love<33

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Demitoriyani In reply to B-x0 [2005-11-08 02:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome always

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