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CieIty [2016-01-20 00:15:10 +0000 UTC]
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The premise of the picture is incredibly cute - the accentuated pose of both of them embracing is cliche, but really well drawn, and the stylized/fantasy aspect of the characters themselves breaths a sense of freshness to the overall piece .
The proportions are actually pretty accurate, even with your stylized techniques, but what I did notice is that you made an attempt to conceal most of the hand(s) and fingers - I'd assume that you have trouble drawing hands? Either that, or it's just the perspective you were trying to emphasize.
Though your line-work and coloring techniques are something I've seen before - you somehow have put your own creative spin onto it and have created an incredible style that I find absolutely amazing. The white outline was a nice touch-up that rounds up the drawing, and ties it up in a neat little bow.
The originality of the characters amazes me, since I have trouble thinking up of character designs myself. Whether these designs are yours or someone else's - I applaud it's sense of originality and creativity that most artist's these days are seeming to lack (including me, as it would seem.)
I consider your art style and art in general vastly greater and different from mine - I see little fault in the line-work, and the only thing I could possibly suggest at the moment is to create a more alluring background. I find it OK as it is, but I feel that the drawing would have more flare if the background had more impact and intricacy.
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B0RZOI In reply to CieIty [2016-01-20 01:20:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the critique! I agree with everything Being a ' feral ' artist I indeed Β can't draw hands at all ! Should definitely work on that ^^'
The one with the beanie is my fursona and the other is my best friend's fursona, both of them have been designed by me so thanks a lot !
And yeah I'm definitely not into backgrounds ( I have no patience ! ) so I tend to stick textures.. maybe one day I'll do something more thorough haha!
Your art style is actually very nice, you just earned a watch from me
If you were interested by their full design..
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CieIty In reply to B0RZOI [2016-01-20 03:26:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the reply and watch, as well as the full design! It's really good
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