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This poemwill be found
where you live,
somewhat short of breath,
missing an arm,
and looking
for the way
things used to be.
It will tell
the story of a dream
watching a dream.
Behind small jars
of cardamom
and bay leaf
you will catch
its scent, and,
as you move aside
a thing or two,
it will look up
with lips that purse
like an eye
to recite
all the words for blue
(which might also
be all the names
for wind, weariness,
and God).
It will tell you
what kind you have been,
recalling
the shoes you wore
when you were.
This poem
will be found
where poems always are.
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Comments: 125
harzgeist In reply to ??? [2008-09-15 07:55:51 +0000 UTC]
it caught my eye on my starting page, and I just had to read it. Love it
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b1gfan In reply to harzgeist [2008-09-15 17:21:00 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you Amber - that is very kind of you to say.
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captive-serenity In reply to ??? [2008-09-15 04:55:58 +0000 UTC]
-gasps-
But where do all go poems go?
And what happens...
when poems die...
hmmm...-shifty eyes-
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b1gfan In reply to captive-serenity [2008-09-15 05:37:01 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh hmmm.. a conundrum...Thank you for the s on "This Poem" and "Real Objects"
That's so supportive of you.
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captive-serenity In reply to b1gfan [2008-09-16 03:13:53 +0000 UTC]
tehehe. ^^
And welcome. I'm just a supportive little fan, I am, I am. ^^
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RedDragonfly In reply to ??? [2008-09-15 04:01:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you know I'm a sucker for roughed-up missing-a-leg sorts of things, like this charming poem.
But it has a present for me, too, in return for the safe hiding place behind the cardamom.
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b1gfan In reply to RedDragonfly [2008-09-15 05:30:04 +0000 UTC]
I will be sure to send every broken lil bugger your way
Thank you for the my buddy
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Hobbit-San In reply to ??? [2008-09-15 00:11:51 +0000 UTC]
this really made me think about it. had to read it twice, but only because i wanted to get in deep as it were... really great work Dave
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b1gfan In reply to Hobbit-San [2008-09-15 00:12:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Danny - you are ever so kind to my poems I appreciate all the support and time.
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Hobbit-San In reply to b1gfan [2008-09-15 00:20:22 +0000 UTC]
your welcome. they are so great to read!
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BeanieTheCabbage In reply to ??? [2008-09-14 23:48:04 +0000 UTC]
WALDO IS UNDER YOUR BED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XD
lovely!
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b1gfan In reply to BeanieTheCabbage [2008-09-15 00:10:21 +0000 UTC]
sill Waldo...come on outta there and get your shoes. It's time for dinner
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BeanieTheCabbage In reply to b1gfan [2008-09-15 00:13:50 +0000 UTC]
Waldo is part of the C.I.A
That's why no one knows where he is XD
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Blueskye27 In reply to ??? [2008-09-14 23:47:59 +0000 UTC]
It's...what is it? It's a wow....yeah, a wow!
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b1gfan In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-09-15 00:10:48 +0000 UTC]
that'd be you - my friend of wow
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Blueskye27 In reply to b1gfan [2008-09-15 01:23:46 +0000 UTC]
If you keep overloading me with wow's, I'm gonna show my age and break out into groovy...
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b1gfan In reply to Blueskye27 [2008-09-15 05:34:41 +0000 UTC]
ohhhh...groovy - that'd be bitchin' (remember that one)
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Blueskye27 In reply to b1gfan [2008-09-15 12:03:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh, yeah, I remember. We jumped straight from the 60's to the 80's!
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Angel2kiss In reply to b1gfan [2008-09-16 00:13:03 +0000 UTC]
...lol i just love that face ^^,your welcome!
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