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Published: 2005-03-04 03:42:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 323; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 10
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Description your taunting whispers
PRESSURE'S BUILDING
IN THE dArKNEss IT WAITEs

your glaring eyes
WHITE CLENCHED HANDS
IT WANTs To gET ouT

your spiteful words
I'M STRAINING
LEAsHEd bY MY FEAr

your smug arrogance
NO MORE CONTROL
ITs cLAWINg AT MY WILL

fuel
SMILING
FrEE
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Comments: 14

bakdraft [2007-05-23 23:15:57 +0000 UTC]

lol

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RogueVRX [2007-04-15 09:50:22 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

Short, sweet, but oh so much feeling inside.

Well done!!

xx

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bakdraft In reply to RogueVRX [2007-04-15 09:56:47 +0000 UTC]

thankyou.

yeah i was in a wierd mood when i did that

the voices told me to write it

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slechticky-puvod [2005-11-13 01:12:48 +0000 UTC]

HI!

i love it, nice touch with the caps, it really adds to the mood of the whole thing almost like it twists you as you read.


<~thrown up on stage as you were reading it, hehe

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bakdraft In reply to slechticky-puvod [2005-11-15 02:57:39 +0000 UTC]

hello there

yeah, it took me a while to see how i could make more emphasis

thankyou for the compliment

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SJNero [2005-11-03 02:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Like me!

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bakdraft In reply to SJNero [2007-04-14 13:05:12 +0000 UTC]

LIKE YOU!

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bakdraft In reply to SJNero [2005-11-03 20:25:17 +0000 UTC]

?

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bakdraft [2005-08-01 03:11:40 +0000 UTC]

thanx for noticing
all intentional of corse-hehehehe

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N3TH [2005-07-29 10:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I loved the use of capitals and really short sentance structure with the middle line of each stanza. Really makes the thoughts stand out, and reinforce their message.

Very nice

-NΒ£TH

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Hawes [2005-07-26 03:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Good job, I like short poems, I have a short attention span - it reminds me a lot of my father's poetry too... that is how it focused on moods on physical objects (good combo).

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bakdraft In reply to Hawes [2005-07-27 00:04:18 +0000 UTC]

cheers, this poem means a lot to me compared to some of my other stuff... i dont think you'ld like my other stuff, they're really long compared to this one

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HeatherD [2005-06-28 22:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Very nice metaphor and imagery

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bakdraft In reply to HeatherD [2005-06-30 02:13:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you,
it was my very first poem that i had done in aaaaaaages!
my other stuff is on my other account lol, this is ment 2 be my images account

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