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Published: 2008-09-09 05:39:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 39; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description Single lines of nothingness
laced with shades of grey
watch the pretty wording
slowly slip away
Lines that lead to roadways
roadways lead to hell
don't live life alone,
I swear I'll never tell.
I took it for granted
left it in the rain
No one wants a lost belief
And so what now remains?
Broken heart in hand
wrists in bloody red
which of me do you want,
the angry or the dead?
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Comments: 2

PanDemoniumAeon [2008-09-09 14:11:39 +0000 UTC]

well written! was not only interesting but insightfull, strong vivid imagery and thoughts provided! last line realy hits the nail on the head in addition! very original last line!

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BasicEternity In reply to PanDemoniumAeon [2008-09-09 15:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank You!

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