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Published: 2008-05-28 08:18:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 44; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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We lie in a sea of tonguesSubmerged to our necks in useless thoughts
Words that no longer hold any meaning
Fog hangs low
And I wonder if the world still exists when I close my eyes
Or if it simply disappears, a figment
I have created everything before me, everything behind me
And I am the only person around
We lie together, side by side
And the seventh angel steps forward
Trumpet in hand, starry eyed and fate bound
Fog hangs low
And I wonder if he knows the destruction
Maybe when the storm finally breaks
We will stand
But until then
We lie together, side by side
alone
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kurosora1984 [2008-05-28 14:19:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow...you had me at "sea of tongues"...what a mental picture! *shudder* Awfully macabre.
But yeah, cool poem! Very vivd! ^_^
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BasicEternity In reply to kurosora1984 [2008-05-28 19:11:36 +0000 UTC]
thanks! Im not thrilled with this one, but I'm not sure where to begin reworking it...oh well, ill let it sit for a while
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