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Published: 2006-04-24 19:39:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 16520; Favourites: 454; Downloads: 1139
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UPDATE: A sorta disclaimer!~~~~~~~~~~~~
“But Rari, that’ll hurt too much! I’d rather keep you close, married like dust to a broom, than be strewn in the wide world in pieces. Oh, if you but give me a piece of you to keep...!”
“I would,” said her eyes. I lowered mine when she spoke. “Then choose.”
“Give me your heart to keep.” What a song were these words! I sang them like a dying bird. Already I imagined her heart, the size of my fist, in my palm. Where would I keep it... perhaps within my own chest? At that moment I felt I had room to closet two.
She loosened her tie and opened her blouse down to just beneath her breasts. Undoing the buttons there, she held her chest open for me to take her heart.
“Tie the veins and arteries together. Yes, with strands of your hair, that will do! Take care to keep it beating. I will be very cold without it.”
For a moment she held the bloody pump in her hand so I could shut up her chest, and then she surrendered it to me, her heart, and buttoned up her blouse herself.
I brought it to my lips, planting a kiss on the mouth-like valve. “I shall keep it safe and warm.” She had such softness in her eyes. “Oh, Margarita, what shall you take from me?”
“Let me take your liver, Doloris, and then we must part...”
~~~excerpt from Chapter I of Divesting Doloris
Doloris and Margarita from 's short novel.
Uh yeah, they're not really gonna rip each other's organs out, but they are in a broom closet... sort of.
Well, I have to draw something sooner or later.
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Comments: 135
batangbatugan In reply to nerp [2006-04-28 09:03:34 +0000 UTC]
There is only so much two people can do in such a confined space
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Purple-Ghost21 In reply to ??? [2006-04-26 10:54:44 +0000 UTC]
wow thats awsome, you have a great consitant style
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gothicathedral [2006-04-26 04:33:28 +0000 UTC]
malupit 'to! the concept is great! the atmosphere around it takes you there, you can almost feel them breathing!
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bunnymew In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 19:26:29 +0000 UTC]
oh wow...this rocks. it looks like they're in a box XD
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sm16 [2006-04-25 14:54:53 +0000 UTC]
hot!!! coolness ^^
it's just too bad you can't enter the contests
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Delurianne In reply to sm16 [2006-05-03 13:55:19 +0000 UTC]
grabe no? imagine those closets in spcp can't even fit one person in there!!!
...but I had those in mind back when I wrote DD.
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sm16 In reply to Delurianne [2006-05-03 14:33:16 +0000 UTC]
XD well the setting did feel like it XD
just 10 more months.... 10 more months O.O
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Delurianne In reply to sm16 [2006-05-04 10:03:41 +0000 UTC]
enjoy that last year... make it memorable.
there's nothing quite like highschool in the same way that there's nothing quite like college ^^
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BlackMageAlodia [2006-04-25 14:22:33 +0000 UTC]
*.* wow! That's cool!^__^ I wish I had your pencil skills..Y___________Y
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Ogs-Peace [2006-04-25 13:06:40 +0000 UTC]
BRAVO! hhahaha, ur unortho-style still prevails, and still.. ur among all of ur concepts.. .this one.. really is an eyecatcher! hahah, ganda pareng! keep it up.. todo suporta!
nice exerpt..
- Ogs
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ika-siyam In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 10:41:18 +0000 UTC]
oi! senswal!
bakit kaya kasama pati liver...O_o
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batangbatugan In reply to ika-siyam [2006-04-25 11:34:02 +0000 UTC]
Have a read and find out!
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Delurianne [2006-04-25 10:38:17 +0000 UTC]
It works, that is does... although I noticed that their skirts are both a FOOT shorter than regulation.
...Hope these commentors get to see past the "hot lesbian action" though. It unnerves me a little. I wrote Divesting Doloris to show there's more to it than the sex (actually, very little of it is about that.)
oh well, but when you draw women like this there's no avoiding it eh?
hope they read the story, at least, on this bait, looking for hot lesbo action where all there is is painful human error touche'!
Thanks so much, and sorry again for your disqualification you inhuman penciller you!
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batangbatugan In reply to Delurianne [2006-04-25 11:32:46 +0000 UTC]
Yeah.. it's kinda hard to paint a vivid picture of the scene without becoming suggestive to viewers, especially for those who haven't read the story. (I just added a sorta disclaimer, hope that helps a bit)
Well, at least they'll mosey on down to your page and read DD(hopefully). *whispers*we comic people would always say: sex(kahit suggestive lang) sells
Uh yeah, the skirts are my fault. (partly Sam's fault, too)
No problem, I can always keep trying!
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Delurianne In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-25 11:50:16 +0000 UTC]
haha. thanks, didn't need that though. but while it's there that's "hardly any sexual acts" (grammar check Xp)
actually, that's why DD starts the way it does.
It's bait, because yeah, no denying: sex sells. ~_~
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batangbatugan In reply to Delurianne [2006-04-25 14:12:28 +0000 UTC]
Oops. Thanks. (rolls off to fix bad grammar)
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delic8-angel [2006-04-25 07:52:07 +0000 UTC]
woohh lezbo action! LOL
asteeeeggg! lmao
[+fav]
ps. just bcuz if faved it, it duzn mean ima lezbo hah?! LOL
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batangbatugan In reply to delic8-angel [2006-04-25 11:19:40 +0000 UTC]
Yes, of course. I'd fave this too, if it was possible.
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Carrie-Kube In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 07:41:56 +0000 UTC]
I like it. So why were you disqualified?
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batangbatugan In reply to Carrie-Kube [2006-04-25 11:18:42 +0000 UTC]
I guess she answered your question. "too great" is highly questionable, though.
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Delurianne In reply to Carrie-Kube [2006-04-25 10:39:31 +0000 UTC]
*delru butts in*
he's disqualified for being a professional. People just don't want to join when he's in. Too great.
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TehBeardedOne [2006-04-25 06:43:12 +0000 UTC]
great work, the lines are nice and clean and the crosshatching works a charm
also, the minor fact of having LEZZIES in ur pic, is always a plus!
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batangbatugan In reply to TehBeardedOne [2006-04-25 11:16:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Admittedly the crosshatching is there because I was lazy and hate doing real backgrounds.
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TehBeardedOne In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-25 11:25:28 +0000 UTC]
haha "real" backgrounds are evil!!!
but i reckon if there was a "real" background in there you'd lose an awful lot of the mood, so being lazy aint always a bad thing heheh
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batangbatugan In reply to TehBeardedOne [2006-04-25 11:37:47 +0000 UTC]
Ah! You are totally correct, my friend.
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TehBeardedOne In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-25 19:45:01 +0000 UTC]
heheeh
wahahaha i jus noticed what song those lyrics are from in your signature, bloody good choice mate XD
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batangbatugan In reply to NELZ [2006-04-25 11:14:29 +0000 UTC]
Right.. unconventional
Thanks!
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johnbecaro In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 03:12:50 +0000 UTC]
AWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Yan ang sabi ko.harahrahrarh..MORE! MORE!
mukhang nauna na ako sa kanila...hehe
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batangbatugan In reply to johnbecaro [2006-04-25 11:14:03 +0000 UTC]
Sorry to disappoint pero wala naman talagang nangyari dito e Symbolic lang, kumbaga. (O literal translation ba? ewan!
)
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johnbecaro In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-26 02:47:49 +0000 UTC]
^_____^ Ayos lang. pero kahit papano aandar imagination mo nito...harhahrah..by the way , I've seen your photos with Jinky Coronado.parang payat ka doon kesa noong nakita kita sa Culture Crash Comics ?hehehe
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batangbatugan In reply to johnbecaro [2006-04-28 09:07:01 +0000 UTC]
I don't find that suprising, kung nakita mo akong tumaba doon ka magulat!
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