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Published: 2006-04-24 19:39:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 16519; Favourites: 454; Downloads: 1139
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Description UPDATE: A sorta disclaimer! Contrary to what it may obviously imply, there was hardly any sexual acts in Divesting Doloris. I implore you to give it a read(it's pretty short anyway), there's more- very much more to it than meets the eye. It's kinda hard to visualize the scene without being suggestive.

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“But Rari, that’ll hurt too much! I’d rather keep you close, married like dust to a broom, than be strewn in the wide world in pieces. Oh, if you but give me a piece of you to keep...!”

“I would,” said her eyes. I lowered mine when she spoke. “Then choose.”

“Give me your heart to keep.” What a song were these words! I sang them like a dying bird. Already I imagined her heart, the size of my fist, in my palm. Where would I keep it... perhaps within my own chest? At that moment I felt I had room to closet two.

She loosened her tie and opened her blouse down to just beneath her breasts. Undoing the buttons there, she held her chest open for me to take her heart.

“Tie the veins and arteries together. Yes, with strands of your hair, that will do! Take care to keep it beating. I will be very cold without it.”

For a moment she held the bloody pump in her hand so I could shut up her chest, and then she surrendered it to me, her heart, and buttoned up her blouse herself.

I brought it to my lips, planting a kiss on the mouth-like valve. “I shall keep it safe and warm.” She had such softness in her eyes. “Oh, Margarita, what shall you take from me?”

“Let me take your liver, Doloris, and then we must part...”

~~~excerpt from Chapter I of Divesting Doloris

Doloris and Margarita from 's short novel. If you're curious as to what the heck is going on, read it here. And while you're at it, join her Divesting Doloris contest, too. (note: I'm disqualified )

Uh yeah, they're not really gonna rip each other's organs out, but they are in a broom closet... sort of.

Well, I have to draw something sooner or later. Dang, it's been almost a month! So here ya go. Sketched during the last daMeat/videoke session(those who know, know what that is ) Finished off with the usual 2B mechanical pencil. I thought this scene really needed some mood, hence the splash of color. It's not much Delru, but hope it still works for ya. ^__^
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Comments: 135

jonasdiego [2006-04-25 02:10:36 +0000 UTC]

Luh-man!

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batangbatugan In reply to jonasdiego [2006-04-25 11:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Luh-man?

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jonasdiego In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-26 10:07:50 +0000 UTC]

Flesh!

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pablo87 In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 02:06:33 +0000 UTC]

one wor ""

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arktiari In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 01:59:42 +0000 UTC]

...Inside the broom closet, huh? hot and kinky, I'd say...

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sachsen [2006-04-25 01:58:15 +0000 UTC]

AAAYYYYY bad po yan kuya! BAD BAD! *repeatedly clicks the Add-to-Favourites button*

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batangbatugan In reply to sachsen [2006-04-25 11:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Oy wala naman bad dito ah, pero dahil finave mo to patatawarin kita.

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over-the-rainbow In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 01:27:17 +0000 UTC]

god oo nga no. i forgot to go to the effing meet.

haha! i know how much you want to draw them~

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batangbatugan In reply to over-the-rainbow [2006-04-25 11:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you do?

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over-the-rainbow In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-25 13:35:00 +0000 UTC]

oh ye yuri fanboy? *raises eyebrow*

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edtadeo [2006-04-25 01:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Lesies! Astig...as in nakaka-astig ng laman. Wahahaha!

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batangbatugan In reply to edtadeo [2006-04-25 11:10:30 +0000 UTC]

Uh yeah... pero wala namang nangyari e Nasa utak lang natin yun Give it a read man, masaya sya.

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glassjawwe In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 01:13:23 +0000 UTC]

holy

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Riguz In reply to ??? [2006-04-25 00:49:36 +0000 UTC]

that looks wildly sexy! they remind me of the russian singers tatto

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batangbatugan In reply to Riguz [2006-04-25 11:09:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, they do, don't they... it's probably the skirt.

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Riguz In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-25 12:21:09 +0000 UTC]

i specially love the skirts ! ohhh yeahh

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LordDante715 [2006-04-25 00:35:37 +0000 UTC]

we all love sex in a broomcloset

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batangbatugan In reply to LordDante715 [2006-04-25 11:06:16 +0000 UTC]

There's no real action there, actually I't kinda hard to visualize the scene without suggesting anything. ^^

But yeah, we love the broom closet.

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LordDante715 In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-25 15:53:52 +0000 UTC]

yeah well it looks like its going to lead up to sex (they're on 2nd maybe 3rd base) X0

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BasyoWilligart In reply to ??? [2006-04-24 23:37:55 +0000 UTC]

what the F$@K!!! more HOT LESBIAN ACTION PLEASE!!!

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batangbatugan In reply to BasyoWilligart [2006-04-25 11:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Uh, there isn't really anything going on there... though it may look like it.

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the-kid36 [2006-04-24 23:09:29 +0000 UTC]

thats damn hot

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KellyGirl1 In reply to ??? [2006-04-24 22:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Execellent work. Love the detail and the colour.

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batangbatugan In reply to KellyGirl1 [2006-04-25 11:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Glad you liked them. ^_^

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cheeks-74 In reply to ??? [2006-04-24 21:45:58 +0000 UTC]

that is wonderful!

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2ngaw [2006-04-24 21:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Great use of lines!

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vampiremeiji [2006-04-24 20:52:10 +0000 UTC]

parang singer ng TATU...lam mo b un?

"all the things she said, all the things she said..running to my head, running to my head all the things she said"

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batangbatugan In reply to vampiremeiji [2006-04-25 11:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Uh yeah, of course I do. Delru sings a mean version of that song.

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vampiremeiji In reply to batangbatugan [2006-04-25 12:03:24 +0000 UTC]

DELRU

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batangbatugan In reply to vampiremeiji [2006-04-25 14:14:54 +0000 UTC]

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MistressLegato In reply to ??? [2006-04-24 20:37:16 +0000 UTC]

A beautiful excerpt and an amaaazing piece! So intimate for sure!!

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batangbatugan In reply to MistressLegato [2006-04-25 11:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Mistress! ^___^

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zephre In reply to ??? [2006-04-24 20:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Great Image! Well done!

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N3RMiN In reply to ??? [2006-04-24 19:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Thats pretty hot!!

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