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1CYY [2012-03-21 20:00:57 +0000 UTC]

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I really like the background very creative. The texture is nice to. The coloring is neat to!... And I love the white one's eyes. The color's are nice to...

Cons (what you could improve on..)

First off lighting... I don't see any light source and the shading looks like you could practice on it more...I barley see Shading on the one with the blood. The blood could be alittle more drippy and darker.. also the paws could use there paw pad's showing a little. They need claws to.. The inner ears could use some more detail and a little more visible. (Hard to see em') Also the muzzles need to be more longer. The mouth looks like shes smiling.. Try curving it down more.. Also the black one need's inner ears. The noses could use some more detail if there foxes maybe some tiny whiskers.

Well thats all! Amazing picture by the way!

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AnikoChamaa [2012-03-21 13:23:40 +0000 UTC]

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Okay,2nd time writing a critique,so I shall start!e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
In my opinion,it's very original.Your anotomy skills are amazing! I wish I could draw paws this good e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> The idea is unique,as well e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>
You and yourself...Sounds so simple,yet so mysterious.I like the shading,it blends very well with the character.Vengy's bloody teeth= +1 more point for the originality!e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

You risked a little with Vengy's face,and that risk made this piece even better.

Dino's expression is also very cute!Combined worry and frighten,I think?I thought she was supposed to be scared as fawk...xDD;;

I love the drawing,the background is also just great!You should try this style more often.

The whole critique,is my point of view ^-^' I'm sorry if I was bad at it,or anything ^^'

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LiiM3 [2012-03-17 01:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Love that song, and this pic makes it, 20% cooler ewe <3

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Radioactive-Spectrum [2012-03-16 15:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I think I'd write a critique since I've been studying anatomy lately~

Cons:
- The back legs. The hinges of the front and back legs are usually on the same level. Making the back leg's hinges a little more up wouldn't be bad. [link] This shall help.
- The tails are too thick. On foxes, tails go from thin to thick. You can work on that, too.
- On Dino Ashen, her stomach is lower than her chest. Plus, her muzzle is way too thick for her breed. I recommend you not to draw fur on the sketch, to keep the chest and the stomach on the same level. Use real pictures of Fennec/ Arctic foxes for a better view of their anatomy!
- You could so more shading, so the lightning source can be visible. Making an arrow at a side of the drawing can tell you where the lighting is coming from.

Pros:
- I like the anatomy on the Oyrnox Dino Ashen. Her muzzle and legs are superbly done.
- The markings are smooth and clean, specially the tail tips.
- I like shadings with colors, and you do a good job with them. But as a said before, more shading would be nice.
- Even tough the lineart is thick, it is clean. I envy you for that!

Vision: ★★★☆☆ Anatomy could be better.
Originality: ★★★☆☆ Honestly, sonas meeting their evil side is too regular. But since this is awesome, I'll make an exception.
Technique: ★★★★☆ SAI and Photoshop magic. You know how to use textures, but you could be better at layer effects.
Impact: ★★★★☆ I really don't know how to describe this lol xD
Devious rating: ★★★★☆

There, I hope it helps. n_n I hope I wasn't rude or anything... D:

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Ariakus89 [2012-03-16 03:34:29 +0000 UTC]

Sorry i see nothing to criticize^^

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SugarPaw123 [2012-03-16 03:32:48 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing, you did great c:

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