kayrybell [2012-09-12 20:33:41 +0000 UTC]

enjoyed: both story and comments

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Dragons-Song [2011-08-12 06:15:06 +0000 UTC]

Gravity, one of the most meanest law enforcements.

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KJ-Illustration [2011-08-02 19:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Hi Your beautiful piece has been featured in my July Feature: [link]

ps. Please (in the left-hand-corner) the article to spread the love and attention if you enjoyed it (:

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LynnStrife [2011-08-02 07:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Very good

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3wyl [2011-07-24 19:12:36 +0000 UTC]

I feel as if the way you have phrased and structured it makes it sound... as if you're coming back to earth, but in a more solid and final way?

I like the way you have phrased things and how it feels as if the person is nearly there with flying away but.. yeah.

It's poignant. I like what you are implying.

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Iwilo [2011-07-23 03:04:42 +0000 UTC]

gravity is a

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chasingbutterfly [2011-07-20 18:42:51 +0000 UTC]

I've met gravity a few times and I have to say that, while I appreciate all the great things he does and how he keeps me from flying off into space, he's not a very nice guy.

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V-Oblivion [2011-07-20 16:30:40 +0000 UTC]

Funny, me like!

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Stojke13 [2011-07-20 07:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh... I forgot about gravity

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!!!

Maybe you should make it more dynamic in the process of jump. I think something like:

Up, up and awaaaaaaaaa...

Oh, gravity...

But still, marvelous piece

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