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BBSMJ — :Drowning: Practice.

Published: 2012-09-29 19:42:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 718; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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I wanted to try out underwater effects again, they didn't work so well.
Can you guys give me tips or show me tutorials? ^^ Or even put it in the critique? Thanks~
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BlackJack187139 [2012-09-30 04:05:00 +0000 UTC]

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It actually looks really, really, frekken awesome. The only thing I have to ask though is that, What? Are you drowning? I mean, in the picture you look unconscious, falling into the blackness so to speak. May I suggest If you don't want to look dead try making the eyes open? I'm just saying. Not that you have to. I don't know if that was your intension or what. ANYWAY. To,.... How do you say it? Tell you're in water? I don't know. But maybe at the very top or at the corner show the waves splashing. Get what I'm trying to picture? Also, The way you did the shading effects for the water was pretty detailed so definately keep that. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/> And then the bubble were a excellent hit too. Hope this helped in any way!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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BBSMJ In reply to BlackJack187139 [2012-09-30 15:46:52 +0000 UTC]

: ) Thanks, bro.

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BlackJack187139 In reply to BBSMJ [2012-10-13 15:15:10 +0000 UTC]

Anytime.

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BoxxyFoxy [2012-09-29 20:09:52 +0000 UTC]

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;A;... It's prettiful. But as you like me to do that's not all I have to say. the shading is wonderful in this & looks so much like a painting! This makes me feel sorry for your poor little character aswell ;A; poor jackieeee~ T^T. Now the negatives. Her limbs still seem stuff to me. I need more movement. even when they die! i'd like to see the limbs bent a bit. second is the front legs seem a bit too far apart (from what I can see). while her back limbs are perfect. other than that it's beautiful. the water looks realistic to me! good job jacs! just keep practicing on your anatomy got it? hope I wasn't to harsh~

Love, Foxy

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BBSMJ In reply to BoxxyFoxy [2012-09-29 20:15:21 +0000 UTC]

;U; Thanks, Foxy~

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BoxxyFoxy In reply to BBSMJ [2012-09-29 20:15:48 +0000 UTC]

no problem bud!

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wolfs-of-angrl87 [2013-02-16 21:48:10 +0000 UTC]

not bad so awesome that look you can been awesome art girl

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BBSMJ In reply to wolfs-of-angrl87 [2013-02-19 02:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, dude. C:

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wolfs-of-angrl87 In reply to BBSMJ [2013-02-19 03:50:55 +0000 UTC]

np

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deaxx [2012-10-01 17:05:22 +0000 UTC]

wooow so awesome*w*

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BBSMJ In reply to deaxx [2012-10-02 00:33:03 +0000 UTC]

;A; Thanks bro~

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pikazilla24 [2012-09-30 03:46:14 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT

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BBSMJ In reply to pikazilla24 [2012-10-01 01:48:12 +0000 UTC]

;u; Thanks~

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pikazilla24 In reply to BBSMJ [2012-10-01 22:52:22 +0000 UTC]

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fionathecat [2012-09-29 22:19:11 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS BEAUTIFULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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BBSMJ In reply to fionathecat [2012-10-01 01:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~

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wholesomewriter32 [2012-09-29 19:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Nowyour drowning your fursona? Murderer!

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BBSMJ In reply to wholesomewriter32 [2012-09-29 20:22:41 +0000 UTC]

It's just practice! XDDD She represents me, and I'm not dead.... yet.. XD

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wholesomewriter32 In reply to BBSMJ [2012-09-29 20:39:01 +0000 UTC]

I know, Im being sarcastic. XD

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BBSMJ In reply to wholesomewriter32 [2012-09-29 20:46:26 +0000 UTC]

... Dangit. XD

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