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BCRich40 — Improving Skills - Part 10
Published: 2012-07-18 19:04:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 39019; Favourites: 385; Downloads: 298
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It took it's time, but I finally managed to finish it! I'm tired now.I got so much to say about this part, but I try to keep it short. I'm really happy with this! Shape of heads is radically changing all the time, colours need more practice etc. Nevertheless, I'm happy! I used so much time for this. It took two and half weeks, but it was worth it!
And as always:
Please, point out any grammar mistakes you can find. English is not my main language, so there is always something to correct.
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Normally I hesitate to call Dash "cute", because she's not the type who would appreciate it... but hot damn is she adorable in this!!
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Now we need Fluttershy to come along and say "I'm a tree!"
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Yes to the idea or that you got the reference? The Hiimdaisy reference.
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Both
I loved that part!!!
Fluttershy would make an amazing tree.
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i literally burst out laughing when i read what RD said - i'm a snake LMAO
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This is a joke of how stupid the pony is?
Because contrary to popular belief, your brain cells to regenerate and the loss of brain cells from most nights of binge drinking are actually going to decrease your intelligence, as long as you don't do it constantly. Personally, I just think rainbow went crazy!
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I think you may want to re-post that explanation and pre-read it next time...
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Rainbow Dash is best pon- I mean snake.
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i know what you were about to say and twilight sparkle is best pony and rainbow dash is 2nd best pony
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Panel 9 where Twi is talking about a hangover: should be "called a "hangover". Its" ( without the ' )
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ROFL I'm totally bent in four (yes, yes, four, not in two).
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I thought so too, but then I took a look at my brother.
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i don't twilight to end up like rainbow dash its bad enough one of them are suffering the affects of alcohol
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Rainbow Dash is best snake!
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Either Rainbow Dash was stupid from the start...
...or all ponies just have a low amount of brain cells.
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I laughed at the end. Keep up the good work with these!
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love dash hiding in the 3rd last pannel ^^.^ so silly
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Cute, Nice use of "4th" wall I think... Nice dynamic with the characters at any rate. Glade to see the work in progress. Looking forward to the next one.
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These comics are interesting and funny, I'll keep an eye on them.
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RD acting like Derpy is so cute!!!!!
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Panel 3, Lyra:
It should be "what kind of answer ARE YOU looking for?"
Otherwise, the comic was great!
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Thanks! I fixed that and the other mistake you pointed out(part 8).
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Why I laughed my ass off when I saw that? I think it's time to go to sleep.
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first time im reading your comics AND I LOVE THEM!!!!
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lmfao just seein this makes the whole comic awesome xD
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Etanol -> Ethanol. (Panel 6, Twilight)
I totally know what you mean by changing head shape. I've received some comments suggesting that I might be more than 1 person, because my art varies so much! I think consistency comes with practice, which we all need to do. XD
Keep it awesome - you're doing great.
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I Fixed that grammar mistake. Thank you for pointing it out!
Since I noticed that I've been drawing muzzles too long, the shape of heads has changed all the time. I haven't found the right kind of balance yet, but hopefully there will be a big difference in the next comic. I'll be so happy when I get done it right.
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Twilight says "dealyed" instead of "delayed", but other than that, the english is fine.
Good read by the way
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