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bdenhawk — will think of two names soon
Published: 2007-10-22 02:51:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Just postin this up here to get feedback from you guys to see what can be improved on before i shade it. Once again i am finishing up *right* before i go to bed so i dont always get my pics to my satisfaction.I was suprised; this turned out pretty good in my opinion, I tried making their faces thinner to give them a more mature look.
If anyone sees anything wrong(and yes i need to change the left girls thigh; it seems too big) , or there is something i need to add; lemme know.
And yeah, i've got a few names for these two...i just havent chosen the ones i will use for them yet. They are supposed to be twins by the way...i need to find out how to make them more similiar.
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I think everything that needs to be revised has already been stated, can't wait for the finished product!
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Heh, i'll reupload it again later...The thing is with me, sometimes i get bored with drawings, and instead i make a completly new drawing instead of refining the old one...this will go into my scraps untill i feel like fixing it lol.
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I think the arms on the girl on the right side are a bit on the thick side, particularly the upper arm area. If you are aiming for muscular, though, the thickness isn't an issue, but you should show some variation in width to show that some parts are muscle...
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Ah okay. thank you for your feedback! I''m glad i get an artist like you to give me tips on my drawings.
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