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Beanjamish — BA- The Fire and the Flames 08
Published: 2010-09-05 19:10:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 4212; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 79
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So Loas just let her go. That's very interesting. I wonder what Loas has in mind.
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And now they're all adorable corpses. lD Good fights so far though. :]
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They'll get better. I think? That's how they work right?
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Yeah, they'll be fine. They just need a nap. ^_^
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Love the fight sequence, also again interesting that Huitzi and Akeyra's storyline seems to take precedence over Melody's (good blend of story focus, as it were). Loving it.
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Yeah if someone read this round so far with no knowledge of the OCT or previous rounds of either side or the like I bet they'd think Huitzi was the main character. But that's good. In OCTs I like to make my opponent as important and developed as I can make my own OC.
Mel's gonna gain spotlight later. The first half sorta focuses on Huitzi and Akeyra and the second half on Mel.
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Your always very good about that, making sure you opponents shine just as much as your characters.
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rounds? 0
Pages/ sets/ whatever you wanna call them? 8 more.
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Ah, that explains the epic all out fight.
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