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Published: 2017-06-19 17:31:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 2817; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 8
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Description A poster for the fanfic sequel to my Kirby Princess of Dreamland comic from 2012 based on the anime series Kirby of the star/Kirby Right back at ya! 


Plot// Tiff and Tuff convince cappies to build a new castle home for Princess Julia. But Dedede has plans for her new home. What could he be cooking up this time?

This time, Kirby's appoint will be Hamsturr from Kirby Mass Attack. I'll also be explaining more on Julia's backstory. I can't promise this will be made into a manga comic like the last one since it's was a commission I asked for. I hope you'll all enjoy this fanfic I'm working on. 

All are owned by Nintendo and Hal Labs. 
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marinostyle [2024-02-15 05:47:09 +0000 UTC]

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Springtrapstarwars15 [2020-03-31 20:34:50 +0000 UTC]

 What is going to happen to king dedede? Will he just face the facts that she is rhe true ruller and he will give up and the nightmare Enterprises will turn turn king dedede, escaregoon, and others who are loyal to king dedede into monsters or will he just move away to a new place to rull over.

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BeckTinker21 In reply to Springtrapstarwars15 [2020-04-01 00:32:12 +0000 UTC]

I don't know. I'm not sure how to continue the story yet. But no Dedede isn't going anywhere. Princess will just be a new resident in Dreamland like Kirby was when he arrived. 

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Springtrapstarwars15 In reply to BeckTinker21 [2020-04-01 01:29:04 +0000 UTC]

I think king dedede will discover the helberd due to meta knight and the knights are no longer in the castle. 

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novastartherapter [2017-07-23 15:33:52 +0000 UTC]

hm....very interesting....

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ManiacalDude [2017-06-22 17:34:59 +0000 UTC]

Looks like you decided to revisit Kirby and your OC, huh?

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BeckTinker21 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-22 20:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Yep. It's Kirby's 25th anniversary, and 5th anniversary of my comic, so why not.

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ManiacalDude In reply to BeckTinker21 [2017-06-22 21:38:02 +0000 UTC]

You mean that comic you collaborated with Gerugeon on? Ok, but make sure this character doesn't become a Mary Sue, since she kinda seems like one from what I've read about her. No offense or anything, just hoping you're able to accept criticism.

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BeckTinker21 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-23 00:10:23 +0000 UTC]

None taken. Julia is not a perfect character and will have cons depending on if I chose to continue the story. Kirby's creator didn't want humans in the anime, but this is an alternate universe where the finale never happened, I wanted to add my own character and made her dreamland's former ruler to prove that Dedede's clan were never the rulers of Dreamland.

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ManiacalDude In reply to BeckTinker21 [2017-06-23 07:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Ok, good. Because she kinda came pretty close in that one comic, what with her summoning the Warp Star (which is supposed to be Fumu/Tiff's duty) and all that other stuff.

I will admit I like the idea behind Julia, and I don't get why Sakurai had to put that no-humans rule in the anime (Adeleine deserves some love too, dang it!)

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BeckTinker21 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-23 12:24:33 +0000 UTC]

I was a different writer back then and I made a lot of errors and mistakes. I would have left out that part with her summoning it instead of Tiff, that won't happen again unless Tiff is unable to summon it. As for her hammer turning Kirby into Grand Hammer, I thinking of remodeling it so it looks more like a special hammer to unlock Kirby's Super ability. 

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ManiacalDude In reply to BeckTinker21 [2017-06-23 19:39:11 +0000 UTC]

I see. So she'd essentially serve as a back-up for Tiff/Fumu, huh? Gold-ring-951's stories sort of handled that a little better.

Still, if you can work some more personality into her, that'd be nice.

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BeckTinker21 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-23 21:09:25 +0000 UTC]

I'll see what I can do.

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ManiacalDude In reply to BeckTinker21 [2017-06-24 02:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Ok, nice.

Again, I will say I like the idea behind Julia, someone who is royalty but is an ally and isn't a douche like Dedede, as well as something that shows that Dedede's clan weren't the original rulers. The idea of opposing rulers with different ideals, one from the past and one current, at odds with each other over the same realm is interesting as well. 

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BeckTinker21 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-24 03:36:23 +0000 UTC]

I guess you could say she's like a new rival for Dedede.

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ManiacalDude In reply to BeckTinker21 [2017-06-24 18:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, except, while Kirby is very childlike and innocent, Julia seems to be more than willing to call Dedede out or stand up to him, kinda like Fumu/Tiff.

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BeckTinker21 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-24 18:53:06 +0000 UTC]

I'll tell you more after the second story is posted.

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ManiacalDude In reply to BeckTinker21 [2017-06-25 07:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Ok, that should be interesting to hear.

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Yoshiplays [2017-06-21 15:00:58 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see how this goes. By the way love your mario and sonic comic.

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BeckTinker21 In reply to Yoshiplays [2017-06-21 16:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. 

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Yoshiplays In reply to BeckTinker21 [2017-06-21 18:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Good luck on your comics!!!!!!!

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gold-ring-951 [2017-06-19 21:53:57 +0000 UTC]

We'll see how it goes. You can always ask us for suggestions if needed.

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ManiacalDude In reply to gold-ring-951 [2017-06-23 07:46:27 +0000 UTC]

"Us"?

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gold-ring-951 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-23 08:12:03 +0000 UTC]

I mean me and others who make good suggestions to anyone's stories if they need it.

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ManiacalDude In reply to gold-ring-951 [2017-06-23 17:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Ah, ok. Like who?

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gold-ring-951 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-23 18:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Anyone. Ether me or you if he wants to hear it.

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ManiacalDude In reply to gold-ring-951 [2017-06-24 01:07:39 +0000 UTC]

Ah, ok, cool. 

(You haven't forgotten that one Kirby idea I suggested, have you?)

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gold-ring-951 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-24 09:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Still on that and saved in notes.

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ManiacalDude In reply to gold-ring-951 [2017-06-24 16:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Ok, good. Just wanted to be sure you remembered, though I guess you have other projects you're doing as well, huh?

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gold-ring-951 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-24 19:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Correct.

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ManiacalDude In reply to gold-ring-951 [2017-06-25 04:44:26 +0000 UTC]

So what are you working on this time?

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gold-ring-951 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-25 06:27:10 +0000 UTC]

At the moment I'm doing two mini movie stories I'm writing on.

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ManiacalDude In reply to gold-ring-951 [2017-06-25 07:21:34 +0000 UTC]

"Mini movie" stories?

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gold-ring-951 In reply to ManiacalDude [2017-06-25 08:25:42 +0000 UTC]

You'll all know when you see it.

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ManiacalDude In reply to gold-ring-951 [2017-06-26 00:15:08 +0000 UTC]

Is that so?

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BeckTinker21 In reply to gold-ring-951 [2017-06-20 00:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man. I appreciate it.

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