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Published: 2009-01-28 00:27:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1641; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 91
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Well, out of the WIPs I posted in my journal, most people seemed eager to see ole Lara finished off, so today when I got too bored of revision, I decided I'd finish her.Unfortunately, I've still not sussed out how to make my scanner get a really decent scan yet, so she doesn't look as good as she does in real life so I did have a play with the contrast... but never mind
The background was a bugger, but worth the effort I think
There are a couple of mistakes here, and I am aware of most of them, but if you have some constructive crit you'd like to give me, then go right ahead
Enjoy! Or else Lara will shoot you!
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Lara Croft/Tomb Raider (c) Eidos Interactive
Art (c) Me
Prismacolour markers/pencils, Copic Markers, Mistubishi and Copic fineliners, Hybrid white gel pen and countless cups of coffee
Lots of hours... I lost count!
EDIT: Jun 2nd - Fixed a couple of things that were bugging me, such as her neck and some outline issues
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Comments: 59
LividThor In reply to ??? [2009-01-28 01:21:05 +0000 UTC]
BEC!
it's been long!
how's you been!
*Crackle*
LARA!!!!! ....so sexy D:
Awesome job on this! :3
so colourfull so
AWESOME!
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BecSparrow In reply to LividThor [2009-01-28 23:14:19 +0000 UTC]
I'm fine thank you
Thanks for the kind words!
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LividThor In reply to BecSparrow [2009-01-29 03:06:24 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
aye not bad yeah :3
You're welcome <3
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KiraSaintclair In reply to ??? [2009-01-28 00:51:57 +0000 UTC]
Smashin colours, Becca Super cool *two thumbs up*
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lycanthropeful [2009-01-28 00:36:57 +0000 UTC]
That background is awesome! The variety of colors here is so gorgeous, and I really love the pose that Lara's in. It's so relaxed, yet she still looks intimidating. Also, nice job on blending those deep blues into the shadows - it helps pull everything together!
Constructive critique: Lara's shirt looks great, but the way her chest is looks like the shirt is stuck under her boobs. I know Lara's, erm, "well-endowed," but the way the lines on her shirts sit "under" them is throwing me off. The lines should follow the shape of her form rather than looking like the shirt is tucked underneath. Sorry I didn't explain that very well.
Also, your anatomy looks pretty good, but watch her deltoids, haha. (Shoulders. This might help you out.) They just look a little off - how muscles "fit into each other" is something to consider, though for the most part you did a nice job in making Lara look fit.
Minor inaccuracies, I'd say. This is lovely, dear!
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BecSparrow In reply to lycanthropeful [2009-01-28 23:20:21 +0000 UTC]
Ooh hun, as soon as I saw the length of your comment I knew I was in for some advice, I just nipped to grab my pencil to make some notes!
You know, I just couldn't figure out why her top didn't look 100%, but now.. ah! It's so clear!! I must have gotten carried away with the curves in the ribbing of her top... but I totally see what you mean... sort of looks like her boobs are sucking up the fabric! NOMNOMNOM!! No wonder her boobs are so big - it's all that fabricy goodness!
As for the deltoids... not only did I learn the name of a new muscle, but I'm very grateful that you noticed for the first time I'd tried including it in the structure. I'm very much intent on neatening up my sloppy anatomy this year, and I'll bear that in mind next time I try out the shoulders again. I think part of the problem was that again, I got carried away with my shading and made the triangle shape longer and darker than I originally intended.
Thanks so much for the comment Kelly! You rocks my socks right off! I'll try take those points into account next time
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lycanthropeful In reply to BecSparrow [2009-01-28 23:25:44 +0000 UTC]
Aww, well I'm glad I was able to help. I'm glad you comprehended the boob thing... I was worried I hadn't made it able to be understood.
No problem. I really like helping other people. Not like you have NO idea what you're doing - if I can make someone great even greater, than why not?
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