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THIS IS MY WEE. THIS IS MY CHANCE. THIS IS MY MOMENT TO SHINEEEEEEEEEEE

Author Notes:
 1. Shinobu considers oneself as agender using the old english neutral pronoun “one”. One is more focus of one’s duty as a mysterious ninja.

 2. Shinobu doesn’t care/understand using “they” as a gender pronoun because it’s a plural. She's a weird ten year old.

 3. Ms.Dahlia is a ditto and Caelum's waifu~ She's from this post:_Boop_  

 4. Tried doing a different paneling and bubble style to make it easier for me to edit and grammar mistakes this time~

 5. NEW LOGO!
 
 6. Thank you, and for cameos! Next page will have two more ; D
 
7. Finally, you have no idea how long it took me to rewrite the shitty dialog. 

8. Any one caught DAT reference??//hinthint

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Comments: 39

GammaEmerald [2016-11-03 00:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Ya I caught that dang DaT reference.
I have something for the Q & A now.

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Velink [2016-05-08 07:56:10 +0000 UTC]

the wounded flashback mudkip kinda looks like a gallade

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Animaltamer7 [2016-04-27 14:52:19 +0000 UTC]

I did it! I've finally caught up! *melts into a puddle after binge reading*

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S-bro [2016-03-30 19:42:21 +0000 UTC]

I DIDDN'T COMMENT I AM SO SORRY
But thank for adding my child.
Also RIP bear.

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Sage710 [2016-03-23 21:32:19 +0000 UTC]

I've got to admit that Shinobu looks pretty awesome. Especially with the adaption of Fury Cutter.

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ChineseViking [2016-03-21 13:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Hoooo boy, that Blood Boil discussion. Makes me worry a bit for our Poocheyna buddy there. Don't you go feral on me.

And this is where Blaze taps into her inner power and evolves into a Combusken, right? Unless, did she evolve already? I didn't quite keep track, and it's harder to tell in gijinka runs.

I saw that DaT reference you can't sneak it past me. Heheheh.

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bekkomi In reply to ChineseViking [2016-03-21 16:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Huehuehuehuehue~ Who knows =7=
Let's just say watching Zootopia got me influenced to write certain things

She's working on it : D (well Shinobu is, lol) Her combusken form makes her a blondie and somewhat taller. Gijinka runs are a bit difficult to explain and show these things XD
Biology is weird////

Shit 8'D my subtle reference skills, noooooooooooooo//shot

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Seiryu6 [2016-03-19 04:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Poor Teddiursa bear ;w; he was cute!
And poor Blaze... we cheer for you!!!

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Antarija [2016-03-18 14:13:27 +0000 UTC]

Shinobu is badass ;D
Aslo - poor Rudi. Everyone makes fun of the doggy...
And then he evolves into epic mightyena  *-*

Btw that new logo looks great!

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bekkomi In reply to Antarija [2016-03-19 00:27:29 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to the shinobu hype train XD
YESSSSSS (but not anytime soon because I am a lazy trainer)

Thank you!

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Hazardboy [2016-03-18 07:04:10 +0000 UTC]

I realize that this is extremely unimportant, however my duty as nerd compels me to point out that poochyena does not have the ability intimidate, all poochyenas in the third gen have run away. Mightyena is the one with intimidate.

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bekkomi In reply to Hazardboy [2016-03-19 00:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Aw damn 8'D I'll try to fix the line somehow.

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Hazardboy In reply to bekkomi [2016-03-20 15:00:36 +0000 UTC]

It's all good, the only reason i even noticed was because i play waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much pokemon, I mean, i gotta do something during math, right? 

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Grazyfish [2016-03-17 01:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Damn and people say no one gets hurt in pokemon XD

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LonelyCity [2016-03-16 18:15:19 +0000 UTC]

woah, shinobu has no chill. better watch out for one, aha...

also, when one says "was it self-defence", it should be defense, not defence ;v; 

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bekkomi In reply to LonelyCity [2016-03-16 19:50:45 +0000 UTC]

It's cool, I'll edit it soon =7=

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LamentedGuide [2016-03-16 17:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Lol, poor Rudi. Everyone's poking fun at him XD

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bekkomi In reply to LamentedGuide [2016-03-16 19:50:27 +0000 UTC]

I wrote him too easy to be embarrassed....
It's great.

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searage76-TheRageCon [2016-03-16 17:18:31 +0000 UTC]

imgur.com/YefA11d
BRAH, NICE CHOICE OF MUSIC!  Dj-jo is good

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CurlyTopEarl [2016-03-16 15:57:06 +0000 UTC]

god fuck holy shit the way you draw backgrounds its not fair I want to draw backgrounds like that A+

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bekkomi In reply to CurlyTopEarl [2016-03-16 19:44:27 +0000 UTC]

These bgs are really not fair since I used google sketchup to build and line the backgrounds X'D

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Gecko-Comics [2016-03-16 15:36:30 +0000 UTC]

I use "one" quite frequently XD

I really like the idea of training to fight like a Fighting-type. I hope she's ok though DX

Blood Boil is a really cool idea too that'll definitely come into play later....

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bekkomi In reply to Gecko-Comics [2016-03-16 19:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Blaze will be fiiiiiiiiine =7=

Aw yes, the blood boil~ It'll definitely be useful for my story line bullshitting.

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MyestroUnsung [2016-03-16 14:06:58 +0000 UTC]

my chiiiild
also rip ted
we knew it well

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bekkomi In reply to MyestroUnsung [2016-03-16 16:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Ted we knew you for only a short 3 panels, but they were a great 3 panels. 
Rest in pepperonis 8'D

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viathatoneartist [2016-03-16 13:38:05 +0000 UTC]

This turned out great! Good job! OvOb

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Fluffypuppy77 [2016-03-16 12:50:39 +0000 UTC]

oh my
0q0

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Hanadoodles [2016-03-16 11:55:40 +0000 UTC]

//jumps on the SHINOBU IS SO ADORABLE bandwagon

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bekkomi In reply to Hanadoodles [2016-03-16 19:43:33 +0000 UTC]

//hops on too

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liamisgreat [2016-03-16 10:44:12 +0000 UTC]

can barney my goodra make a cameo too? i made its gijinka

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bekkomi In reply to liamisgreat [2016-03-16 16:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Sure! The link to the cameo sheet is in the description~
Be sure to fill it out.

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liamisgreat In reply to bekkomi [2016-03-16 22:12:20 +0000 UTC]

look at the cameo sheet, i gave you a comment

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CrossOutBryce [2016-03-16 08:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Nice mix of battle and dialogue scenes, but damn, Shinobu doesn't mess around! lol

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bekkomi In reply to CrossOutBryce [2016-03-16 16:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!~ QAQ
Shinobu is very serious about one's ninja job.  

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RaineyJ [2016-03-16 06:35:28 +0000 UTC]

I have a thing for small ninja, so you just know I love Shinobu already. >w<

Thanks for the cameoooo! Sanja is so adorable :3

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bekkomi In reply to RaineyJ [2016-03-16 15:32:33 +0000 UTC]

Eyyyyy, welcome to the "Shinobu is Adorable" bandwagon XD

And no problem! Your gijinkas have amazing desgins~

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Phyllocactus [2016-03-16 06:22:37 +0000 UTC]

OMG Shinobu is badass
question: Is she a nincada or ninjask? 

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bekkomi In reply to Phyllocactus [2016-03-16 15:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Aw shit. I need to fix that 8'D
Nincada

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Phyllocactus In reply to bekkomi [2016-03-16 15:43:00 +0000 UTC]

I was confused at bit XD

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