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character profile shown in the picture above full view for better resolution and to be able too read betterName: Shadow
Age: 18
Keyblade name: Matteria(Latin for matter,and yes I changed it)
Ability: Sublimation
World: Travers Town
Shadow's background :
it's to big too write hear so here's a [link] to his background
Key blade description:
the key blade is as shown as a gun blade type;a mixture between a sword and a gun. the design is based on lion(Squale)'s keyblade as also shown the key blade is actually 2 key blades connected with a chain they represent Shadow's human and heartless self, also his key blade can only hurt Heartless and Nobodies so it would just pass right through a human without a scratch
Power description :
His ability is called sublimation witch is to change the state of any matter he touch; meaning he can make an object go from solid to liquid to gas to plasma and vise-versa also skipping a phase and going directly to solid from gas or once again vise-versa with out the need to heat or cool down the matter
this ability uses magic depending on the size and type(strength or latent potential) of the matter his changing for example it would tack a lot of magic to try to transfer diamond to a liquid state will changing air from gas to solid would tack no magic at all
the drive gouge represents the ammo for his key blade allowing him to transform the stat of objects faraway; however, he has to charge the bullet with the same amount of MP it would tack him if his touching it
Heartless form(shadow form) : when he is at critical in his case under 20% he can let the dark half of his heart tack over and turns into a heartless, unable to touch his keyblade he holds it from its chain and spines it around
during this form he gains extremely high speed, agility,and power plus matter becomes easier to transform from phase to phase so diamond would transform from solid to liquid as easy as he used to transform air from gas to solid
However once he enters this form it will keep going until it consumes all of his drive gouge afterwords he loses control and it starts taking away from his HP gouge until it reaches one when he returns from this form he loses consciousness and all his MP([link] )
(later on learn to control the darkness)
this character is a reference for
[edite] for (yes I'm that lazy)
How did you find us?:
I just soddenly wok up here, I met Anna and she showed me the place.
Why do you want to join us?:
You guys are strong, the guy I'm after is strong, strong people are bound to cross paths.
How can you and your ability be useful to us?: well I can change the stat of matter for starters
since anything I touch while in contact with Materia can be changed I use air as ammo for my gun (the idea is simple , when you shoot an unarmed gun only air comes out. as that happens I change it's stat from gas to solid thous creating a bullet, and since air is everywhere I never run out of ammo)
also with my drive bullets I can change the stat of far away objects so I can shoot a bullet changing the stat of the ground to liquid then another bullet to change it back to solid this can be used to immobilize enemies
also make stairs out of air , melt walls, and well the sky's the limit
not to mention my shadow form [link]
Other:
I know I'm not that much right now but I can become so much stronger, I have to be...
[End Edit]
Shadow is my character and there for copyrighted to me I drew him with normal pencil then colored him in photoshop CS3
although Shadow is mine Kingdom Hearts is copyrighted to Squareinx and Tetsuia Namura
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Comments: 164
H-san [2009-12-01 03:13:55 +0000 UTC]
First and foremost, read this: [link]
No dual wielders are allowed (double Keyblade wielders), so I suggest changing that. Also, while you're at it, edit your character sheet to match your descriptions (Keyblade name specifically). Another rule in *Keyguards - no Heartless. I know it's a Drive form, but technically, it means he has a "Heartless", so change that somehow.
Another big thing is spelling and grammar. Fix all those little mistakes and try to keep it short and succinct. Your sentences are too long with no breaks in-between. I see no fullstops or commas. Though this factor isn't a big issue, it can get annoying and/or disconcerting to read long-winded paragraphs that go on and on and on with no break and they just keep going and going and going. See what I mean?
Other than that, your Keyblade design, and character design is awesome.
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Beng91 In reply to H-san [2009-12-05 13:31:05 +0000 UTC]
Ok so I've redesigned him [link]
but losing his heartless self and keyblade makes it a little bit hard to regroup
is it possible to set the joining date after he had regained his heart
at which case he would poses one keyblade(the whole heart) and have no heartless form
would that be acceptable?
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H-san In reply to Beng91 [2009-12-07 12:47:22 +0000 UTC]
Uh... ._.;;;
I'm not staff, so I wouldn't be 100% sure, but it sounds ok. As long as you followed those guidelines I gave you, and made sure he fits the criteria - as well as edit the little mistakes in spelling and grammar - you should be ok.
The people you should be asking are the staffers - and do so via note to the club. Or you can pop in the chat room and see if anyone's willing to help there.
Otherwise, that's all the information I can give you. Sorry.
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Rivux [2009-01-09 22:52:20 +0000 UTC]
hmm is your character good with hand-to-hand combat if he can't hurt anyone with his keyblade right?
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Beng91 In reply to Rivux [2009-01-10 20:34:45 +0000 UTC]
he can't cut them not hit them, but he can still give them a hell of a headache, also he can still deflect, punch, and if needed turn them to gas or liquid
besides it's a gun before a blade so it's used for long range the cutting comes when he's in heartless form or another form I will post later on
Shadow: hey, are you underestimating my power?
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Rivux In reply to Beng91 [2009-02-02 00:18:54 +0000 UTC]
One more question: Do I note the club to submit art?
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Beng91 In reply to Rivux [2009-02-02 09:18:37 +0000 UTC]
yes and you should probably ask the club or go to the FAQ section
but I'm faltered you asked me
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Rivux In reply to Beng91 [2009-01-10 22:31:22 +0000 UTC]
okay, I understand now.
Kevin: No,no, I just didn't really understand it,that's why.
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Beng91 In reply to Darknezz1 [2008-08-24 19:32:01 +0000 UTC]
domo arigato gozimasu(thank you very much)
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Beng91 In reply to Darknezz1 [2008-08-25 09:04:58 +0000 UTC]
Sugoiii
nihongo ga yoku wakarimasu ka
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Darknezz1 In reply to Beng91 [2008-08-25 14:26:25 +0000 UTC]
sorry i don't know that much yet
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Beng91 In reply to Darknezz1 [2008-08-25 15:46:13 +0000 UTC]
you actually answered correctly
I new you didn't know that much that's why I asked you
nihongo ga yoku wakarimasu ka
as in "do you understand Japanese well?"
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Beng91 In reply to Darknezz1 [2008-08-26 07:33:14 +0000 UTC]
ya good times
well...
I guess that's it
I'm adding you to my watch
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Regreme [2008-07-13 22:34:50 +0000 UTC]
Though I love the design, those are not Keyblades in any sense of the design. Heck, I can't count how many people don't make Keyblade designs right on this site.-_-' Sure, the designs are cool, but they actually call them Keyblades? (Sorry for the rambling. Just that it ticks me off.)
Other than that fact though, definitely love the design. You're a skilled artist.^_^
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Beng91 In reply to Regreme [2008-07-13 22:41:24 +0000 UTC]
I know it does that's why I add what do you think about the keyblade but now that you mentioned it the keyblade you get from Auron doesn't look much like a keyblade ether I trued 5 different designs until it poppet into my head
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Regreme In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-13 22:42:46 +0000 UTC]
Wrong, actually. The one you get from Auron follows all the rules to making a Keyblade, even if it's an odd shaped one.
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Beng91 In reply to Regreme [2008-07-14 09:39:21 +0000 UTC]
i think i miss read one of your comments
no it doesn't
besides if you put my awesomeness gun-keyblades together in opposite direction they become a keyblade if you noticed there actually one key blade not 2
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Regreme In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-14 18:46:57 +0000 UTC]
Yes, it does. I'll get a picture.
[link]
The one Auron gives you is number 9. It has all the features of a Keyblade: Dual handguard that protects the front and back of the hilt, keychain, asymmetrical(not symmetrical), and something representing the 'teeth' of the Keyblade.
So, it does fit the Keyblade theme.
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Beng91 In reply to Regreme [2008-07-14 20:00:40 +0000 UTC]
well that being said
my gun-keyblade still poses the duel hand guard and teeth if you put both blades together(facing each other from the gun hole thingy with one flipped horizontally)
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Regreme In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-14 20:07:41 +0000 UTC]
Not sure what you mean. I'd have to see the picture of it as the Keyblade.
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Beng91 In reply to Regreme [2008-07-14 20:57:52 +0000 UTC]
understood once I post one
well you'll probably know
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shadosong [2008-07-09 00:43:30 +0000 UTC]
Zelfrig: welcome to the club, mate, looks like you'll be one to go heartless-hunting with
love the keyblades!
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-10 10:51:37 +0000 UTC]
thx a lot clap:
heartless-hunting sounds fun
Shadow: wtf I'm half heartless
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-10 21:14:21 +0000 UTC]
Zelfrig: ahhh that don' matter, I like to go after the big ones *stretches arms wide*
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-11 08:34:03 +0000 UTC]
Shadow: dud you better get away from me or I'll freaking stab you, shit my key blade can't hurt peopl*Zelfrig closing in* NOooooooo
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-11 16:47:24 +0000 UTC]
Zelfrig: haha now why would i waste my time going after you? *points to Behemoth Heartless* that's my target
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-11 22:10:16 +0000 UTC]
o plz send me a link to your OC and Behemoth Heartless
Shadow:*points with his gun at Behemoth and shoots* what target
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-11 22:20:12 +0000 UTC]
[link] well theres my old.OLD pic of him lol i so need to redraw him. [link] theres the behomoth
Zelfrig: aim for his horns, thats the sensitive spot *creates shadows and charges the behemoth*
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-11 22:44:16 +0000 UTC]
behomoth is awesome
and I can redraw him for you if I can get myself to do anything
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-11 22:55:39 +0000 UTC]
lol doesnt matter to me...since its not my heartless lol
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-12 10:48:40 +0000 UTC]
the re draw was directed towards Zelfrig
Shadow to continuing from last time: TRANS ON *runs towards the behomoth* AAAAAA die
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-12 23:13:33 +0000 UTC]
oh..hmm well im gunna revamp him first(he needs a new outfit its been a year) so after then sure!
Zelfrig: *jumps and does a yoda move* hmph stupid beast...that CAN'T be all you've got...
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-13 07:50:30 +0000 UTC]
sweet
by the way what's a Yoda
Shadow:*runs towards behemoth from the front then jumps over him doing a aerial back flip wile shooting at him* now finish him
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-13 16:58:26 +0000 UTC]
*gasp* Yoda from Star Wars? pls tell me you've seen it?
Zelfrig: *jumps and slashes through the behemoth's horn* There. Target Eliminated.
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-13 19:35:07 +0000 UTC]
ya I figured
so a would be doing the same moves he did in attack of the clones when he was fighting Ducko or in revenge of the thith
((FF7 victory battle music))
Shadow: *raises his keyblade then looks around* where is this music coming from
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-13 21:01:35 +0000 UTC]
haha EXACTLY!
Zelfrig: Hmph...*picks up a cellphone* this it?
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-13 21:37:30 +0000 UTC]
you still didn't elaborate on the move
Shadow: hay isn't that cloud's phone
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-14 01:16:09 +0000 UTC]
oh where he jumps and does a 360 and lands with a blow to the head(or horn if ur a behemoth
Zelfrig: *sigh* yeah it is...I told him to always take care of it, guess we need to find it and give it back to him.
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-14 09:35:01 +0000 UTC]
Shadow: where do you think we'll find him, O I have an idea lets go find Tifa she's certain to have no idea what so ever about where he is
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-14 16:33:25 +0000 UTC]
this is wat Zelfrig looks like now [link]
Zelfrig:good thinking. Last I heard she had gone to the Colliseum.
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-14 20:19:38 +0000 UTC]
hay why aren't you on my watch list
sweet now I can draw him a lot easier also as I sad nice design
Shadow: sweet we'll go and be Heroes, AHU...how do you move from world to world, now that I mentioned it where are we
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shadosong In reply to Beng91 [2008-07-14 22:32:56 +0000 UTC]
woohoo! *clicks deh watchy button*
Zelfrig: we are in Radiant Garden. The heartless numbers have decreased but now they are getting bigger and bigger as you've just seen. Well most keybladers take a lil gummi ship. BUT I am part of the Keyguards so I kinda have the hookup *takes out car keys and presses button to make a black car with a red heart on the side appear*
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Beng91 In reply to shadosong [2008-07-15 12:06:18 +0000 UTC]
if your in the key guards could you ask them to answer my note
Shadow: well that's much better than falling into a Pitt of darkness with no knowledge of where your going
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