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Dawn into the Blue
A poem by Peter S. Quinn
Dawn into the blue
From night of dreamy play
Sunshine coming though
Till the end of the day
Like love with desire
The evening coming here
In the darkish glow fire
That becomes then near
Dream dreams of love
In the feelings they give
Like a moonshine above
When the night stars live
You and I so true
In night of luminary glow
Everything then to renew
Before morning will flow
Drawn in to tomorrow
With our hearts now beating
In the new born echo
That our ears are reading
Dawn into the blue
From yesterdays so sweet
And remember I love you
In all its shadingβs treat
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The poem appeared on www.poemhunter.com/peter-s-quinn
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Comments: 28
Felka-wolf [2009-09-13 22:43:35 +0000 UTC]
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I've got...three words for you. Beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful. The fiery glow of the sun contrasts perfectly with the bluer and icier clouds above. The line of trees I see in a lot of photos, but you keep them blurry and undefined, and that is interesting, making the sun and the clouds more noticeable and eye-catching. Remember, this IS only my third critique ever, so if you don't agree with it, that's okay.
Once again, I'm drawn to the glowing sun just above the tree line. It seemed like you made it softer, and how it fades into the blue is awesome.
I think you made the blue clouds a teensy bit softer, too, and made the interior glow a bit. But I can't be sure.
Overall, wonderful picture.
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sorrowdiess [2009-09-14 12:16:41 +0000 UTC]
really great colors Bem, i loved the way they spread on the sky.
good work
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ghibli92 [2009-09-14 01:04:19 +0000 UTC]
That's simply gorgeous...it takes my breath away!
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Ahmedqatar In reply to BenHeine [2009-09-13 23:48:40 +0000 UTC]
We (as Muslims) will have a big festival after a week and i would like to make an art for it !!
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BenHeine In reply to Ahmedqatar [2009-09-14 00:08:26 +0000 UTC]
Feel free to use and print it, but I'd be grateful if you don't modify it, thanks my friend, and all the best for your celebration
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Ahmedqatar In reply to BenHeine [2009-09-14 02:48:36 +0000 UTC]
Any modification will be limited .. thank you
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Garrison-Kelly [2009-09-13 23:05:21 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful blend of colors! This should be a Daily Deviation! ^_^
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BenHeine In reply to Garrison-Kelly [2009-09-13 23:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank u Garrison, you're so kind
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Garrison-Kelly In reply to BenHeine [2009-09-14 01:01:32 +0000 UTC]
Glad I could help!
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BenHeine In reply to myheartyoung [2009-09-13 23:00:04 +0000 UTC]
thank u!! Pure minimalism
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myheartyoung In reply to BenHeine [2009-09-13 23:02:43 +0000 UTC]
really? it doesn't show
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