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Just a project I've been working on for a while featuring Marlie with some of my favorite characters from other artists~Featured in this pic, (left to right), we have Roxy (From ), Malice (From ), Marlie (From Me, ), Blair (From ), and Ciera (From ). :3
I had a lot of fun working on this, and I really hope you guys like it!
Enjoy~ ^^
Roxy belongs to ©
Malice belongs to ©
Blair belongs to ©
Ciera belongs to ©
Marlie belongs to ©
Art by me. :3
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CyberToothCat [2015-02-25 10:02:30 +0000 UTC]
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First off man, you know I love your artwork, and your characters.
You have a very unique style and it's all your own, in my opinion it's almost a perfect fusion of anime and cartoon with exceptionally well done outfits and that anatomy, I approve ;3
Despite all that I do have a few problems and you're going to hate it, but... it's the boobs. They're just way too out there, and I know that's what your going and I now this is the internet and I'm going to get crucified for ranting about boobs, but so be it. The problem I have with it is the picture focuses too much on the boobs and not so much about the unique characters they're attached to. All see when I look at this picture is "BOOBS!" There's nothing wrong with it, but to me a group fan art like this is supposed to focus on each person's character and not just on one thing. and when I said I approve of the anatomy, I mean it's pleasing to my eyes at first, but when I get to thinking critically about like i am right now all I can think is "Wow, all these women are the same size"
Dude, seriously, not everyone is the same size, you have to have different weights sizes and measurements, otherwise it doesn't feel real. In an average group of five women, how many of them are 5'5" 180lbs and a 36DD?. odds are none of them to be quite honest, but this is fantasy universe, so I guess it could work.
All I'm saying dude it try for more diversity, it'll be better for you in the long run.
Other than that just the general, maybe try shades and highlights man, I don't know. I like what you, but sometimes I like to give you a push in the right direction.
Don't quit drawing dude, try to do it everyday if you can, it really does help.
Hope you find what I've said here helpful and I can't wait to see what you draw next ^w^
Peace!
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BenjiPaws In reply to CyberToothCat [2015-02-25 17:10:18 +0000 UTC]
Well, thanks for the critique! Very well put! :3
And I see your point on the boobs thing. X3 But, ya know me. I'll keep that in mind, tho. X3
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ManhattonOctoberfest In reply to BenjiPaws [2015-02-25 21:57:36 +0000 UTC]
I agree with Cyber. Get your head out of the gutter with the giant breasts. Anyone who knows these character's individually, especially the creators of some of these characters, are not buying it. Your exaggeration is obvious. >.>
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WilliamPendragon [2015-02-24 18:23:23 +0000 UTC]
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You have really impressed me with this. I can see that you put a lot of time and effort into this deviation.
First of all, this impresses me because they all look like they're actually together rather than just copied and pasted over one another. Second of all, you really aced the designs. Their faces are super cute, the anatomy is spot on, and the outfits are looking really amazing. And third of all, I can see you put a bit more detail into Ciera's hair. you should do that more often, because it's looking good.
So, that's my critique. I hope it motivates you. I really look forward to seeing more of your artwork.
Ti-Dye~
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BenjiPaws In reply to WilliamPendragon [2015-02-25 17:10:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Very kind of you. :3
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WilliamPendragon In reply to BenjiPaws [2015-02-25 17:11:45 +0000 UTC]
Of course! You and your art deserve it! 0U<
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GamePonySly [2015-06-15 04:14:04 +0000 UTC]
GOD WOW... I don't have words to describe this perfect group photo. *Roxy and Malice oh yes*
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Travis-Lawsons [2015-03-22 21:03:41 +0000 UTC]
Malice looks cute and I really like the navel piercing
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xXNatoriousXx [2015-03-22 20:55:36 +0000 UTC]
*Looks a the second one to the leftwith the black and red hair*
GIMMIE!
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wolfjedisamuel [2015-03-22 08:05:41 +0000 UTC]
In actuality, the gals brought 10 of their girls to the party, ergo, there are 15 gals in this piece (if you catch my drift)
But man, you are talented. Your style and designs are so appealing.
Amazing work, sir
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The-Great-Saphira In reply to BenjiPaws [2015-03-13 05:48:10 +0000 UTC]
Quite welcome. I look forward to see more. I expect great things from you.
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Skyrama123456789 In reply to BenjiPaws [2015-03-08 18:29:21 +0000 UTC]
Welcome and I love your art also
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Skyrama123456789 In reply to BenjiPaws [2015-03-09 03:12:55 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome x10000 and I'll be watching your art no matter what you draw
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MicroDogWinter [2015-02-26 18:22:20 +0000 UTC]
given all of the artists here, you guys are amazing, and to create such a collaborative piece, is absolutely stunning. You guys do a wonderful job, and I encourage you guys to keep going.
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MicroDogWinter In reply to BenjiPaws [2015-03-09 04:02:24 +0000 UTC]
Hey no problem, i always love your works
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Spocky87 [2015-02-25 16:44:23 +0000 UTC]
I don't recognize them except yours and Malice. Nice work on the lines and colors man!
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BenjiPaws In reply to James-Dark-Blue-Wolf [2015-02-25 06:46:32 +0000 UTC]
Agreed. Thanks. x3
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CoolCSD1986 [2015-02-24 17:21:30 +0000 UTC]
All five furry gals look really nice and lovely together in this group picture you've done, man!
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CoolCSD1986 In reply to BenjiPaws [2015-02-25 19:30:02 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome as always!
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Tony-Akita [2015-02-24 01:46:40 +0000 UTC]
Finally glad to see this in all of its finished glory. ^^
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