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Description Another venus critter, the rotik from Burroughs

"a monstrous creatures of the deep, some of which defy description and would challenge belief. The most numerous of these larger creatures must attain a length of fully a thousand feet. It has a wide mouth and huge, protruding eyes between which a smaller eye is perched upon a cylindrical shaft some fifteen feet above its head. The shaft is erectile, and when the creature is at rest upon the surface or when it is swimming normally beneath, it reclines along its back; but when alarmed or searching for food, the shaft springs erect. It also functions as a periscope as the beast swims a few feet beneath the surface. The Amtorians call it a rotik, meaning three-eye. When I first saw one I thought it an enormous ocean liner as it lay on the surface of the ocean in the distance."

Obviously, my version of this thing isn't so big. It might be sperm-whale sized or even better, orca (since orcas are pelagic predators that might have some use for vision while hunting...if they didn't have sonar, anyway). In my next version, I will make it clearer that the eye is on a stalk.

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MEGslayer [2011-08-07 01:34:02 +0000 UTC]

hmm...maybe long and eel-like, but depressed with a long, lumpy, teardrop-like profile. The tail could be lined with erectile struts that effect to a collapsing membrane, and the anterior section (the "bulge" of the teardrop) could be lined with contractile pockets instead of fins.

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bensen-daniel In reply to MEGslayer [2011-08-24 16:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. Something like a teardrop is what I was thinking. What would the contractile pockets do? Generate thrust?

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MEGslayer In reply to bensen-daniel [2011-08-26 23:29:08 +0000 UTC]

that, or quick maneuvering. I know that certain species of Paramecium have contractile vacuoles that they use for quick bursts of speed, but i think that the relative viscosity of water would render that ineffective at Rotik scale.

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bensen-daniel In reply to MEGslayer [2011-08-27 07:28:10 +0000 UTC]

That's a good point. Also, since the rotik is described as long and eel-like, it's a pretty good bet it uses its tail to generate thrust (why else have a long tail?) Although in my design, I did my best to suggest that it evolved from squid-like ancestors.

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MEGslayer In reply to bensen-daniel [2011-10-07 18:44:13 +0000 UTC]

...making the lower jaw complex a group of modified arms... that's a really interesting idea! However, I didn't really notice the "squid ancestry" until you mentioned it. I'm not really sure how far you can go with the whole squid motif until you leave the source material entirely. Maybe something subtle, like vestigial chromatophores?

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bensen-daniel In reply to MEGslayer [2011-10-07 20:40:01 +0000 UTC]

That would certainly look cool.

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Sphenacodon [2010-03-14 20:59:31 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to see what the whole thing looks like. Also, Burroughs doesn't describe it much beyond "big" and "three-eyed", so pretty much any artistic license would be fair.

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bensen-daniel In reply to Sphenacodon [2010-04-06 05:52:03 +0000 UTC]

the biggest challenge is figuring out what makes sense for it ecologically.

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