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Published: 2014-12-06 00:06:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 479; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Above thick roots
knotted and gnarled
by unanswered questions,
birds chirp riddles
to neighboring trees.

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Comments: 11

zippip [2014-12-07 16:07:26 +0000 UTC]

That's such an interesting and lovely little piece!

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betwixtthepages In reply to zippip [2014-12-07 22:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Glad you like it!

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Amarantheans [2014-12-06 20:03:05 +0000 UTC]

This is quite a lovely piece

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betwixtthepages In reply to Amarantheans [2014-12-06 20:15:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Amarantheans In reply to betwixtthepages [2014-12-07 01:32:50 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome

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somethingzenzen [2014-12-06 03:42:51 +0000 UTC]

This is a wonderful poem. What a beautiful scene. It says quite a bit in such small space, as a good tanka should. And I think the mystery comes through very well. Excellent work!  ^_^

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betwixtthepages In reply to somethingzenzen [2014-12-06 20:16:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the excellent feedback! I appreciate it!

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somethingzenzen In reply to betwixtthepages [2014-12-07 04:29:15 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Jade-Pandora [2014-12-06 01:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh, and don't forget to submit it to the-haiku-club so I can help vote it in!

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Jade-Pandora [2014-12-06 01:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Aw dear Beth, this tanka is sweet!  Yes, I like it very much, and thank you for writing this as one of my prizes!

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betwixtthepages In reply to Jade-Pandora [2014-12-06 20:16:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you like it!  

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