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Published: 2011-04-19 21:43:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 21857; Favourites: 119; Downloads: 282
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One rather old drawing, or, more exactly, a brief series of drawings that I shaped as a comic strip. I wasn't very happy with the quality of this series, and I believe that my today skills are better. However, I reconsidered the drawings and discovered that the worst errors could be corrected easily - what I did now. Originally the girl had horribly long legs in the cheapest cartoon style, that confirmed that "too good is actually bad" - normally, the long legs should be a merit, but here was another case... I do see some other faults, like, not very convincing arms and hands on the panels 2 and 3. But well, why should I hide this piece? I hope, some people may like it! Also, it's a rare case when I don't need to put a Mature Content tag---
There is a story behind this picture.
A girl had visited her best friend in a clinic. Her friend was in a rather bad condition after she had been heavily beaten and raped by three unknown hooligans. Very upset, our heroine was going home and making a shortcut to a subway station across a block of apartment houses.
Suddenly, she spotted three guys standing on her way and talking - and making impression that they pay no attention on a lonely girl. It was already dark (it was the first half of March), and nobody was around.
The girl quickly turned to the right and ran along a fence towards one of the houses - only to find that there was no path between the fence and the building. She was cornered! Fortunately, there was a hole in the fence - and she hasn't hesitated to went through the hole.
She ended up on a construction site that seemed to be abandoned. There were no lights, very likely, there were no guards, and she could only pray that there were no dogs there. Seeing almost nothing in the darkness, very scared, she ran forward towards the gates - and you can see what has happened!
It has been raining for several days before that - and the ground was very soft. She had no idea that she ran across a deep trench filled with wet and soft clay that has been dumped in the trench only recently.
When she remembered about her cell phone, it was too late. Touch screen covered with the mud refused to work. To scream? But the hooligans will be the first who would hear her screams...
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Comments: 34
AlphaGodzilla1985 [2020-08-15 12:10:58 +0000 UTC]
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Billie-Bonce In reply to AlphaGodzilla1985 [2020-08-15 17:56:23 +0000 UTC]
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ThetaOfQuicksandFun [2016-01-24 09:59:45 +0000 UTC]
I don't like fully clothed quicksand scenes but this is a good way to experiment.
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Billie-Bonce In reply to ThetaOfQuicksandFun [2016-01-24 11:21:57 +0000 UTC]
I also prefer nude sinking bodies - but it demands more efforts to invent appropriate stories. What I like about sinking in clothes is that the mud (especially clay) sticks to clothes and makes the escape much more difficult.
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ThetaOfQuicksandFun In reply to Billie-Bonce [2016-01-24 12:36:18 +0000 UTC]
"but it demands more efforts to invent appropriate stories." There are people out there that like to sink in quicksand in various ways and enjoy the bottomless feeling. What can be more appropriate than that? You don't always have to make it seem normal. Some people seek out deep mud recreationally.
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Billie-Bonce In reply to ThetaOfQuicksandFun [2016-01-24 15:36:01 +0000 UTC]
I know, but I prefer perilous or embarrassing accidents
Well, the following scenario also works: "Waaaaah, I wanted to plaaaaaay in it, and I got stuuuuuuuck! Somebody get me out of here pleeeeeeease!" Though I don't want to repeat it too often.
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ThetaOfQuicksandFun In reply to Billie-Bonce [2016-01-25 06:13:58 +0000 UTC]
That is understood.
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Billie-Bonce In reply to magicengr [2016-01-10 16:03:39 +0000 UTC]
Glad that you like it! Thanks for faving!
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MynaOphelia [2011-04-27 23:19:39 +0000 UTC]
ooooh! like quicksand! I love this! nice story behind it too xP
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Billie-Bonce In reply to Mega-Man-King [2011-04-22 14:23:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And thanks for the fave, too!
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Mega-Man-King In reply to Billie-Bonce [2011-06-14 03:23:54 +0000 UTC]
I gonna try and save her. Is that okay?
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Billie-Bonce In reply to Mega-Man-King [2011-06-14 20:10:43 +0000 UTC]
Surely! But please don't try to roleplay here. You may draw a picture showing a follow-up (whatever you imagine) or write a story. You can send me a link and I may add it here. I encourage any creative development of the situations that I show in my gallery.
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KionoWinterfox [2011-04-20 07:28:30 +0000 UTC]
*murrs* I like her jacket and the kneeboots! And the mud too!
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Billie-Bonce In reply to KionoWinterfox [2011-04-20 09:26:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! It's not that often you can see a girl having some clothes on my drawings
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KionoWinterfox In reply to Billie-Bonce [2011-04-21 10:00:06 +0000 UTC]
Yepp, one of the reasons for faving.
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PM2K [2011-04-20 05:37:45 +0000 UTC]
Love it! Love the set up and the way you paced the action in the art.
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Billie-Bonce In reply to PM2K [2011-04-20 09:22:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! Always nice to hear your comments!
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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2011-04-20 02:58:51 +0000 UTC]
Eep. This could be a problem.
Nice work on pics & story
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Billie-Bonce In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2011-04-20 20:47:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
Honestly, the story was actually a part of a long story which I started to develop almost 6 years ago, and I wished to make a long comic (I preferred to call it manga). Since then I greatly improved my drawing skills, but still they are not good enough to finish even a short and simple story... I don't use the characters that I developed for that "manga", but I started to use some bits of the story. For example, this one.
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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to Billie-Bonce [2011-04-21 05:23:23 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see
And you're welcome
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Billie-Bonce In reply to parangsakti [2011-04-20 09:31:11 +0000 UTC]
It was rather cold, so the tar could be quite solid. But the clay was soft!
Next time another girl would sneak to the same construction site in Summer - and she would stuck in tar.
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KritterDefier [2011-04-20 00:04:46 +0000 UTC]
xD Hehehe an old but great picture I dare say! ^_^ Thanks for sharing ;3
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Blades-123 [2011-04-19 22:52:44 +0000 UTC]
Great story, cool poses, always a pleasure to see your work.
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Billie-Bonce In reply to Blades-123 [2011-04-20 09:19:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Very much appreciated!
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TobyRobin [2011-04-19 22:43:00 +0000 UTC]
Nice work, Billie! This looks like a great storyboard.
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Billie-Bonce In reply to TobyRobin [2011-04-20 09:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! This was one of my first attempts in composing images together.
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