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melancholysnail [2018-11-06 11:38:11 +0000 UTC]
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There's only two main things I notice that can be improved when looking at this: the shading, and the clothing. In general, I'd say to work on anatomy, but that's something everyone can improve on. (I know this is a chibi, but that doesn't mean some things can't be off.)
There doesn't seem to be a particular light source - I saw this on your other work, too. I recommend deciding where the light is coming from and keeping that in mind while you add shading and highlights. References for lighting are really helpful.
The clothes aren't very realistic... Again, references for clothing are great! Most fabrics don't cling to the body, unless tailored to be that way. Even if you have to sacrifice showing off her curves, I feel like your art will look better.
I hope I don't sound condescending or rude, I'd just really like to see you improve! Your art has gotten so much better in the years since you've joined the site. Keep going!
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BinkaKitty In reply to melancholysnail [2018-11-06 18:08:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the critique! I do know i need some work on anatomy lol but being a chibi, i honestly dont put too much focus on that. Same goes with clothes when it comes to my chibi And shading has never been a strong point for me, i know i need a lot of practice.
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