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Continued here andIdea for this courtesy of
Major Edit: Text added and some minor artistic changes to ease the flow in the entire series
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theoldhorse In reply to ??? [2012-01-07 22:32:04 +0000 UTC]
1st pannel: my lil pony da dad da
2nd pannel: ahh a letter from one of the ponies.
3rd pannel: glup, a very big letter!
4th pannel: hello princess, sorry to drop in like this, oh not at all my fathful student, its nice but please, drop outside the bath, ones mane is hard to wash,
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Birdco In reply to theoldhorse [2012-01-07 22:38:10 +0000 UTC]
That pretty good... I intentionally left in uncaptioned, because I didn't think I could improve it with words
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theoldhorse In reply to Birdco [2012-01-08 14:00:54 +0000 UTC]
well there you go, just give me the crirdit when you add the titles,
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Jrakob In reply to ??? [2012-01-07 21:46:00 +0000 UTC]
3rd panel would look lot's better if you had Celestia's one visible eye looking like it was closed.
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Birdco In reply to Jrakob [2012-01-07 21:47:28 +0000 UTC]
I was going for the surprised look... I guess I made the pupil a little large...
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Jrakob In reply to Birdco [2012-01-07 22:01:39 +0000 UTC]
oh well see I think that this comic could become even funner if you had her close her eyes (so as to keep them from getting soapy water in them) than ADD a panel where she her eyes are open and her face with a slightly perturbed look. and than the last panel remains the same but the context becomes more funny because she realizes it's a mare and (at least in my mind) her face in the last panel looks a bit like molestia XD
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Birdco In reply to Jrakob [2012-01-07 22:13:03 +0000 UTC]
I think you analysis of the alternative on this is valid. However, I was trying to stick to a 4koma on this comic. the closing of the eye would work well if I was to add a 5 frame, but in only 4 frames... I'm not as sure.
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Jrakob In reply to Birdco [2012-01-07 22:14:38 +0000 UTC]
I hear you I hear you. well just a thought from one artist to another. maybe just story it in your brain for later.
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Birdco In reply to Jrakob [2012-01-07 22:22:41 +0000 UTC]
I will.
Oh, and the Molestia vibe is intentional.
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Jrakob [2012-01-07 21:45:37 +0000 UTC]
#rd panel would look lot's better if you had Celestia's one visible eye looking like it was closed.
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Grusnoid [2012-01-07 21:35:14 +0000 UTC]
This went from awkward, to creepy in three panels flat. Lol, keep up the good work.
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Birdco In reply to Grusnoid [2012-01-07 21:36:38 +0000 UTC]
I was giggling the entire time I was making this...
That probably doesn't say good things about me, does it...
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Grusnoid In reply to Birdco [2012-01-08 03:11:58 +0000 UTC]
Probably not. But I'm not here, to judge your sexual preferences.
Lol! Yeah, I can be a jerk.
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Armasyll In reply to ??? [2012-01-07 21:33:44 +0000 UTC]
But I think you got the horn wrong; it should be smaller in the beginning *
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Birdco In reply to Armasyll [2012-01-07 21:36:02 +0000 UTC]
If Celestia wasn't laying on her back, you might have seen her wings...
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Edfan1337 In reply to ??? [2012-01-07 21:31:24 +0000 UTC]
"But" backwards = Tub
Secret, but fun... Secret tub fun...
IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW.
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Birdco In reply to Edfan1337 [2012-01-07 21:34:29 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking of leaving without a title, and letting everyone figure it out on their own...
Silly Hub and their pound puppy commercial
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