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Geh. This took a lot longer than what you would expect from a bust portrait...with a twist mind. I think I've reached the wall in terms of what I can do for this image for now, maybe with practice and some distance I may make it better. I hope to return to it one day, so if anyone feels like giving constructive feedback or critique, you are very welcome

I would be particularly interested in anything that would help making the skin more lively, the faces more expressive, and that chest more realistic


The fact that I had to colour it three times probably has a lot to answer for the slow progress.

In the first I had two strong light sources from right and left, and couldn't get it to look alright.
Then I went experimental and tried in in black and white with intention of colouring it though that way. Which is when I discovered that overlay and multiply colouring really disagrees with my colouring needs.
This is it's current look. I wish I could get a meatier look on the skin, but for now this may be the limit to my current abilities.

This is the worked out version from these concepts [link]

I've filed this under surreal rather than horror/macabre, because despite what a fair few will call creepiness, I don't actually mean for it to be that way. It's just that the concept in my mind had a limited number of ways to be expressed, and I wanted to avoid using conventional masks, which left me with this.

It's not that terribly complicated, the face you show the world may not always, or quite often, reflect the feeling inside. It can feel a bit deceptive, but it's not always possible to do what you want or even what you need. If I screamed even a fraction of the times I've felt like it, there would be a lot of worried people in the world.
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Comments: 449

InkAme In reply to ??? [2012-03-10 07:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Nice concept!

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hollow-cat In reply to ??? [2012-03-10 05:55:54 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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OrenjiJuusu [2012-03-10 03:11:31 +0000 UTC]

I actually think the skin looks great. Maybe when you go back you can make the highlights a tad brighter, for a better contrast?

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RynkaDraws [2012-03-09 17:42:44 +0000 UTC]

it somehow reminds me of the giants in the manga shingeki no kyojin

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lady-largo [2012-03-09 14:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Thats style of painting looks really good!. C:

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CaseyKr [2012-03-09 10:19:04 +0000 UTC]

After having this one pop up two or three times for me, I absolutely have to favorite it. It grows on me each time I see it.

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ArtofPrincessM [2012-03-09 04:54:55 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE YOU for making this and having such an interesting concept!

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to ArtofPrincessM [2012-05-27 01:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you

And sorry for the late reply

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NooreoG In reply to ??? [2012-03-09 00:56:55 +0000 UTC]

this is interesting.has the whole in someone else's skin feel to it. i like it

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Yakuun [2012-03-08 23:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is scary!
But awesome drawing skills
Great job

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to Yakuun [2012-05-27 01:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so, thanks

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Noss91 [2012-03-08 21:36:04 +0000 UTC]

I like the concept, and you've got a good technique!

But I see some minor mistakes in the proportions, especially in the faces. The blond guy seems to have his chin a tad low, particularly since his mouth is partly open. The nose has a slightly strange shape as well as the nostril isn't very highlighted, I think you should shade a little more around the side of the nose to make a more naturally shaped nostril
The ear is also a tad misplaced, it should be ending in height with the eyes, while the earlobe should be in line with the sides of the mouth. Just for future reference

About the chest, I was looking at it and thought long and hard about what exactly could be changed... and got to the conclusion that it might be the sharp line. When I covered it with my finger it looked smoother and more natural I think the nipple could also be less round and a little more oval maybe? Looking more relaxed and following the shape of the chest a bit better.

This is a really cool picture, and you used the textures so well! Looking at the concept though, I find that his eyes are far more expressive on the sketches compared to this version. Maybe you should try tweaking the shape on the eyes a little to make them more similar to the concept? That might help with the facial expression.

I hope this comment will be helpful to you and that I wasn't just rambling about nothing xD Keep up the amazing work!

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to Noss91 [2012-05-27 01:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Sorry about the late reply. I've fallen off the DA wagon a while there, so I'm more late than usual too. I suspect I may as well make my apologies for this my signature

Anyway, thank you for writing some great critique With distance I've noticed more and more errors, some which you have mentioned too. I think a part of me is tempted to restart and make it whole different, maybe put some angle to it to make it more alive looking (I hope) Your comments are still appreciated though, and may very well help with a new take on it too.

And again, sorry about the delay, especially when it comes to such scrumptious comments as this

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Noss91 In reply to Birgitte-Gustavsen [2012-05-27 14:46:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem at all!
I'm just glad to help

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Meleni In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 15:39:53 +0000 UTC]

This is so freaky o_O I like the way you've coloured it, though. The texture is spot on

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IvoryPeony In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 14:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, but creepy concept o.o

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to IvoryPeony [2012-04-28 20:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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LilaVanila In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 14:12:09 +0000 UTC]

Creepy,awesome and someway cute

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to LilaVanila [2012-04-28 20:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I've heard quite a bit of the first two, but cute may be a first on this one

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LilaVanila In reply to Birgitte-Gustavsen [2012-05-02 11:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes

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AleisterDoe In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 13:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow, fraky and really creative! Outstanding work, great!

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to AleisterDoe [2012-05-27 01:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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CharlieMcDoodlez In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 12:59:01 +0000 UTC]

scary + awesome= scary awesome ....so on retrospect this is scary awesome keep up the good work

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Templarii [2012-03-08 10:49:34 +0000 UTC]

Totally surrel, but really intersting.
Good work

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to Templarii [2012-04-28 20:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Glad you found it interesting, thanks

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gemlovesyou [2012-03-08 10:28:00 +0000 UTC]

This is so creepy but it's really good, nice work.

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to gemlovesyou [2012-04-28 19:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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LawrenceCreation [2012-03-08 09:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Interesting drawing i had to do a double take to see what was going on here

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to LawrenceCreation [2012-04-28 19:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Glad that you found it worth a second look, thanks

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twistedangel0 In reply to ??? [2012-03-08 07:11:39 +0000 UTC]

I love the name, adds another dimension to the piece.

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to twistedangel0 [2012-04-28 19:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Tsukemi [2012-03-08 06:30:56 +0000 UTC]

waaaa
its such an interesting concept!
it reminds me that we all have hidden personas that we hide away from the rest of the world

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to Tsukemi [2012-04-28 19:59:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, it was sort of what I was aiming for

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ShadowOfHisWings [2012-03-08 03:55:28 +0000 UTC]

hmm its odd but the work is wonderfully done

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to ShadowOfHisWings [2012-04-28 19:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Darinenelle [2012-03-08 02:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Interesting concept, although creepy. But that's okay! Creepy is refreshing

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to Darinenelle [2012-04-28 19:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Cariboubouh [2012-03-08 02:07:28 +0000 UTC]

wow I love it ! it may be creepy for some people but this picture makes me smile =/

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to Cariboubouh [2012-04-28 19:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, that is kind of you to say odd, but kind

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roamingtigress [2012-03-07 23:51:06 +0000 UTC]

Woah, what a concept. Makes you think. Well done!

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to roamingtigress [2012-03-08 00:39:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you find it thought inductive. Thank you

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roamingtigress In reply to Birgitte-Gustavsen [2012-03-08 01:16:34 +0000 UTC]

You are very welocme

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KimJonet In reply to ??? [2012-03-07 23:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Great concept, keep it up!

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to KimJonet [2012-03-08 00:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Cassie-In-Wonderland [2012-03-07 23:16:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very nice idea. You did it perfectly in my opinion

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to Cassie-In-Wonderland [2012-03-08 00:40:18 +0000 UTC]

That's very kind of you to say, though I think there is room for a lot of improvement myself Thank you for commenting

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yanshee [2012-02-17 08:04:39 +0000 UTC]

Nice, remind me of Pink Floyd's album the Wall...

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to yanshee [2012-03-08 00:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Can't recall the lyrics sooo...I'll just take your word for it

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Pumpulaatti [2012-02-14 18:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Very good.

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Birgitte-Gustavsen In reply to Pumpulaatti [2012-03-08 00:40:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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