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Biscuitsaurus — Vision is the art of seeing the invisible
Published: 2014-08-15 13:45:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 993; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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" The life of the dead is set in the memory of the living "
I wanted to try something new, so my Art Trade with Yellwolf of her amazing Character Coraline ♥
This is my first Manip. X'D Doesn't look fine or good, but i really hope you like it Yellwolf!
Photos used:
quaddles quaddles.deviantart.com/art/Bo…
ThePurpleYard-Stock thepurpleyard-stock.deviantart…
Lakela lakela.deviantart.com/art/2014…
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Firstly; I would like to say that I adore this piece and hope not to offend you with anything I say. If you really were not looking for a critique, you may disregard anything written after this and continue on knowing I like the work. Now, let's jump on in!
As for pros, the picture seems to just work with itself. I love how well you merged the pictures together, and I also love the pictures you chose to merge! The shading under the wolf is incredibly nice, and the sprites all seem to have different and original qualities, making it more than a simple copy and paste picture!
As for the cons, although I liked the shading under the wolf, it's a tad dark. Along with that, the shading on the fur makes me confused as to where a specific light source is. To add on with my rant of lights, the sprites produce light on the wolf... But appear to effect nothing on the ground? The sprites produce such an intense light that it makes no sense that the ground is unaffected. Going on, there are certain places that it's obvious you just drew on, like the little tuft of fur on the right of the wolf's chest. Or the piercings on the ear. I recommend using a water coulour brush AROUND these spots you drew on, and try merging it better in with the wolf.
Those are ALL just recommendations, please keep in mind, I really do like your picture! It presents itself well, and is really just a cute concept. I hope to see more things like this from you!
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First off, thank you very much for the critique, since it's my first Manip !
You are complitely right, what you say, also goes for the spirit about the ground aswell the Shading! I could try it to Change and follow your tips , even i don't know if i should reupload it or....
Thank you so much for the critique, it makes me so happy, since i want to get better at everything! : )
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That's cool how you photo manipulated
wow always wondered how to do that!
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Thanks royalbird, it was just practisce : )
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aaa np buddy!
practice makes better!<3
continue it c:
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Thanks sometimes it makes really hard ;__;
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its okay I know :I
but trust me, one day it will all pay off!<3
hang in there ;v; if you need support, I'm here for you
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Thank you so much royal ;__; do you have maybe skype or steam?♥
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Yeah totes! My dad is so strict when it comes to chatting and skype
but I'll still skype you when I can!(:
my slype is : salmonroll97 <3
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Ah no problem : ) And added you <3
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Sweet I'll get on there this weekend!(;<3
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Hehe you're welcome!!(;
<333
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Wow das sieht echt geil aus! Dankeschön 
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Oh, wow. This looks really great Biscuit! I hope that you'll plan to do more photo-minaps in the future!
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Aww Thank you so much Paradise <333 I hope that too in the future! They are sometimes fun, but a bit hard too (drawing furs/tails)
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ah damn i had to comment ;v;; sorry for being late on this hunnie
it turned out really great! i love the photos you chose, they fit well. the glowing ball things are pretty.
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Das sieht einfach nur verdammt gut aus! Ich liebe alles an dem, die Lichtverhältnisse, die Kugeln, die Atmosphäre. <33
Echt toll!
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Danke dir sehr zen, auch für deine Hilfe
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