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Published: 2009-04-23 12:54:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 6321; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 0
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Trying some more Digital Art..Took me all day! The hair took especially long to do.. :3
Hope you like it..
She's an Angelspit fan! ^.^
From scratch in Painter X
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Vision: This drawing conveys what is indented. I like that you have a style of drawing that is your own. I saw it in your other drawings in your gallery. The fact that you have drawn what you know is wonderful. Instead of trying to draw sweet delicate fairies you picked an image that represents yourself. The texture in the background, the makeup, hair and even the mask are all true to the lifestyle. This images expresses what you wanted it to say.
Originality: The style of drawing is original to who you are and to the skill level you are at. The subject matter is something that has been seen and done. It isn't one that has been over used too much in drawing but (no offense to your photos) I have seen tons of photos that are the same.
Technique: The way you draw is fresh. It shows no fear. I am not a big technical artist. I go with what I feel and know. And what I like. I like your shading in the hair, the eyes and the mask. I think you fell short with the shading on the body. You have put detention everywhere but the body and the face look flat. If you add shading around the face put deeper shadows where their should be, like on the neck, where the hair falls on the face and arms. Doing this I believe will make her feel more solid and will bring the image together as a whole.
Over all I like this. The colors and the idea behind it. Her eyes really do look as if they are looking into your soul... but not in an evil way. Keep it up!
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Wow, thank you so much! I will certainly think more about shading the body next time!
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Very interesting piece indeed which has, if I might say so, a rather Repo-esqe feel to it! I admire the specific use of three thematic colours which add to the overall feel of the piece. Facial (especially the eyes), and bodily composition is very good and beautifully rendered. My only issue may be with the proportion which is slightly off in regards to the shoulders in relation to head-size, which is an issue easily resolved with practice - something which every artist encounters - myself included! Shading is well done as is texture and depth. Overall, a very striking piece visually which should great potential in the artist in question!
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Aww why thank you!! I really appreciate your kind words ^.^
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No problem at all! I thought it was about time that I start doing some critiquing! You were my first so there ya go! I'm always sure to give praise where praise is well deserved!
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awww me love her! shes like me.. except shes an angelspit fan haha.
i love the texture on the crin/dreads/hair. it makes me want to touch it!
-FAVES-
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Hahaha thank you ^.^
Touch the texture.. touch it all!
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I really like the color scheme...and teh concept...
the lines are a little bit irritating as in teh fact that they thicken at random points...and I think you should work on anatomy...the shoulders aren't wide enough
but nice work :3
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Aww thank you! ^.^
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Very nice. I love the color scheme. The eyes are full of life. and I've always had a soft spot for the goth girls.
well done!
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Hehe thank you!! ^.^
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I know what you're going for with the hair, But it doesn't look like those dread things. I think you should get rid of the thick outline. Because dreads aren't totally smooth. Also the black in the hair should be lighter, So its breaks it up and differentiates the hair from the goggles and mask. But other then that its a great picture
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Thanks!
Some of them are actually ment to be cyberlox ^.^
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oh I thought they were meant to be yarn dreads. With cyber lox's I'd try and make then kinda shiny.
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They're ment to me synthetic dreads with cyberlox, and the cyberlox do have a little shine to them..
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I'm sorry, I'm a bit tired
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Yay for digital art! You should do a tutorial. Love your colors.
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Aww thank you!!
I dont even remember what i did.. such a mess!
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hehe aww thank you, i'll get to it! ^^
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Thats sooooo good soni! you just pulled this out of no where and it looks soo good! The face is so well done and all the texturing is really good!
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Awwww thank you so much!!!
I wanted to impress ya :3
*fat lip* miss you..
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Wow , nice one ! Only thing is ... the goggles are kinda awkward positioned ... but overall it's amazing ! Great job
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They're meant to be on the side kinda thing
Thanks alot!
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Haha , if the'ye meant to be there , then it's more original
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WOW SONI! (Soni-san, SUGOI!) <--japanese
THIS IS AWSUM BRAH !
CONGRATS ;D
keep it up kid..
"Wanna be on, TOP" <-ANTM
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Haha yay! ANTM!
Arigatou Buraian!! (is that right??...lol)
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hai, so desu.
yeah, its all good
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Angelspit FTW!
I like it, you got the gas mask really well. And I Love black and green mixtures like this. 
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Aww thank you so much!! Hehe yeah Angelspit!
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I think you need to start with the structure of the face first then build on it from there, it will look more realistic even though it's more work and you're covering it up it's worth it. I like the shading and hair although I feel that you could improve the fringe by not making the perimiter as blunt, keep practising
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