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BittyHoneyBreez — Take it Easy
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Published: 2018-01-19 03:19:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 400; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 1
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OCs of mine from a comic i'm (slowly) working on. I'm only a few pages in so far lolRelated content
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Hello! I’m here from ProjectComment.
This. Is. Gorgeous.
Right from the start, I’m going to sy that your work reminds me a bit of Audrey Mok, who recently did the Archie comic and Josie and the Pussycats before that, and I don’t mean that in a “You look the same!” way, but that you both have really clean, neat lines and a great way of conveyiong personality and character through a person’s expressions and body language. (Granted, this is only one panel I’m seeing, so my interpretation of their personalities could be wrong, but I looked at this and immediately thought, “I want to know them.”)
There are so many things about this that I’m in awe of – the shadowed plants in the foreground, the interaction of the guy on his back with the grass, how they all feel like they’re truly laying on top of one another, and the perspective for the parts of them that are farther away. (The one nitpick I’ll make about that is that the hill doesn’t quite carry that over as well. It’s like it just kind of becomes a flat wall right behind the second girl.)
The details here are beautiful, whether the one guy’s frayed jeans or the highlights and shadows in the girls’ flowing manes. Your shading comes across confidently . And the positioning of everyone – I already mentioned how they feel like they have weight against one another, but even before that, this just feels like a natural pile-on. It has me wondering what all of the relationships are (the guy to the left has me thinking he’s the most reserved of the crew), and that would get me to read your story. If I saw this as a cover in a comic shop, I’d have a hard time not buying it, because I love that kind of stuff.
Just thumbs up all around. I love the atmosphere, I love the style… the linework, the colors, the personality. It’s all great. Good luck with this, however slow you may be going. You have at least one stranger intrigued.
Okay, that’s all I have. If there was anything you were hoping to get a comment on that I missed, just let me know and I’ll try to swing back for another look.
Kevin
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Thanks for your comment!
You're totally right about that stupid hill in the background. I may have to go back and play around with the background at some point.
I'm pretty happy that the shading looks good because i've never done cel shading before XD It was fun though
Nice to know that my characters come off as interesting as well! Hopefully I can write a good enough story for them now lol That's the intimidating part.
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you're most welcome it's only natural to support other artists !!
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All your OCs look wicked cool. I love that both the girls have dyed hair, though my personal favorite is Blondie - his glasses give him that sweet-yet-dorky look in my opinion.
Also three of them are like "we need to take a sexy photo" and the fourth is like "uhhhh what is happening okay i'm gonna pose REAL QUICK-"
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Thanks!! I love crazy dyed hair, so a lot of my characters have unnatural hair haha
lolol i know that feeling well
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The three in the front are like my friends trying to take a serious photos
and I'm like the one in the bg
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