HOME | DD
bl1zz4r4 β Selene Character Sheet
Published: 2017-01-12 08:39:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 761; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
Related content
Comments: 7
What an interesting character! I like the idea of her preferring to have their food supplies the hard and exciting way rather than have it cultivate and already on the plate. XDΒ
π: 0 β©: 1
Thanks, also I'm asking some of my friends for critique for my story summary, specially since you already played some VN, I want to ask what parts can I improve for it to be a better VN. If you like I can send the summary as a note.
π: 0 β©: 1
You're so welcome. >u<
Well, I've never really done any critique before since I play the game for the fun, plot, and story. Β This would depend on what kind of VN you are making. Β There's one that only includes multiple choices with interesting amazing story with many routes like Frozen Essence. (The game creator venus-eclipse.deviantart.com/ ), I thing when it comes to graphic and design I believe that you'll do great, add some CG for special scene maybe? OuO
I'm sorry I'm not very suited for a critique, All I can say is that you'll have to pay attention for the BGM, sound effect, glitch, and be careful for any bug. What makes me interested in VN is mainly the story-plot of the MC and their heroines/suitor, their development, and the result of some multiple choices that sometimes trigger many events. Some puzzles along the way is nice, multiple ending for each heroines always makes me curious in all endings so I loved VN since its a simple game. XD (Some of them are simple but exciting with many routes and ending)
π: 0 β©: 1
OK. I'll keep that in mind. For the bgm I already bought a music pack at unityasset store since I got no talent for music composing
π: 0 β©: 1
Glad if I could help. ^^
Ahaha, I have no talent in music either, can't even play any musical instrument right. QuQ You can find lots of source in internet, but just make sure to credit them for Copyright. >u<
π: 0 β©: 1
Yup, but I don't use free ones, I cant use it if I plan to publish my games. I bought the musics I used at my games
π: 0 β©: 1
Oh! That's great! I look forward to see you're game then! XD
π: 0 β©: 0