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Published: 2007-06-28 09:46:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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I inhaled a deep breath of sweet air. The taste, so much cleaner and crisper than that of the air I was bound to breathe. I took another look around and all I was leaving behind; friends, family, loved ones and oh, the memories of it all.Amelia, my companion, came to my side and put a comforting hand on my shoulder. "Are you sure you want to do this?" She always had the more adult viewpoint, the more protective nature. I just looked at her with a quizzical expression that said it all. She just sighed, and I watched her white-silk clad slim figure mingle with crowd, purchasing supplies.
I pushed past a dozen or so merchants, desperately trying to rid themselves of their wares as I wondered to myself that very same question. "Am I sure I want to do this?" With Arenia surrounded by Chaos, it seemed unlikey that any sane adventurer would risk the attempt at salvation. Yes indeed, several brave and valiant souls had risked their lives for their nation, and the only reward was a slow and painful death. It seemed now, Areania had forgotten how to be free, and was slowly rotting away in a constant, black depression.
Maybe I wasn't sane, but at least I wouldn't die in this place. I'd go out fighting.
Comments: 14
Black-Roses-Fall In reply to seeminglymeaningless [2007-07-04 11:44:27 +0000 UTC]
What about hun?
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seeminglymeaningless In reply to Black-Roses-Fall [2007-07-04 11:48:42 +0000 UTC]
heh - the whole thing!
(but that's just me)
what time frame is it written in?
ooo!
no! don't tell me!
just write some more so I can read it!!!
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Music-Legs [2007-06-30 09:29:25 +0000 UTC]
nicely done!! I lurveee it. And go first person narrative! it is underused I say! Chapter 1 here I come...
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Black-Roses-Fall In reply to Music-Legs [2007-06-30 09:31:20 +0000 UTC]
Pfft.. I don't wanna give myself a name.. so I'll just be "I"
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Jadexgirl [2007-06-30 08:45:25 +0000 UTC]
..I'm in love.
You sure know the way to get a reader addicted, don't you Max?
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Black-Roses-Fall In reply to Jadexgirl [2007-06-30 09:28:06 +0000 UTC]
Just enough to hook you m'dear
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Intrinsica [2007-06-28 10:59:30 +0000 UTC]
Yes...tease........WRITE THE DAMN STORY!!!
(Oh, I'm sorry..did I fail to mention it was great???)
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Black-Roses-Fall In reply to Intrinsica [2007-06-28 12:46:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you hun.
I hope I can actually be motivated to write this.
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Intrinsica In reply to Black-Roses-Fall [2007-06-29 09:13:57 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you will be..You WILL BE!
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Intrinsica In reply to Black-Roses-Fall [2007-06-29 10:32:43 +0000 UTC]
*makes big eyes at you*..You couldn't be scawed of liddle ol me...*blinks big cutesy eyes at you*
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Black-Roses-Fall In reply to Intrinsica [2007-06-29 10:34:51 +0000 UTC]
If being too cute was a jailable offence.. you'd be in prison from birth
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Intrinsica In reply to Black-Roses-Fall [2007-06-29 10:36:45 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Don't steal words from my sig...*giggles*...BUT - I could say the same for you too mr!
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