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FireMarioWii [2010-10-31 03:29:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is really beautiful, I can see quite a powerful message speaking here. (If it wasn't intended, then oops.)

You convey Mosaic with a clever set of movement. As the viewer moves their eyes from the top of the picture we see a steady movement towards the bottom of Mosaic's stomach where we see a beautiful, golden exterior. Then you have a dull gray rock below his golden stomach, turning the viewer back upwards to be beheld by an enchanting beauty. With this, you've captured the audience's attention towards this great creature.
You rear his head up high and proud to impress your staggering audience who fall to lack of breath at his majesticness and you reeled them in.

Now, the only thing I see as strange in this is that you present us with a storm correct? Now, I feel you might not use enough contrast to give it the effects of a storm, such as perchance making the four corners of the background layers black so as to increase the effect.
There is also a small twitch on his proportions. If you look at his golden stream around his neck it seems as if he was twisting his neck some ways until it goes into a flat position for his head.

However, you still present an incredible picture here that steals your audience's hearts and manages to convey incredible power. You use a smart set of colors to focus our eyes on the most powerful thing here. By doing this, you present yourself as a magnificent artist. Good job. This is an instant favorite.

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locagirl101 [2010-10-31 01:28:00 +0000 UTC]

love the horns along his body and good use of colors and shading on the scales. good details on the ground, very realistic

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