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Published: 2007-09-05 01:54:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 566; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 27
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Description Once there was light in the sky
Silent understanding, bright and clear
And the brilliance was blinding
...only whispers of what could be

But their shadow covered the horizon
Misunderstandings, a gathering storm
And voices raised like thunder
...it all melted in the unforgiving light

Their blindness caused them aching
Realizations, a million unspoken wishes
And regrets forged in a fire of hurt
...it all melted in the unforgiving heat

Where now, where to go?
The path behind them is erased.
And now looking at the sun they see
...it all melted in the unforgiving.
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Comments: 13

jovialchild [2008-02-15 01:05:19 +0000 UTC]

this looks like the eye of a person two seconds before entering Hell.

it's intense.

*hearty applause*

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blackhandruby In reply to jovialchild [2008-02-15 13:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
That's a unique comment you made there, I like that image.

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StudioChibi [2007-11-30 15:34:06 +0000 UTC]

Really nice !
Is it your eye?

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blackhandruby In reply to StudioChibi [2007-12-03 03:27:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Yes, indeed, it is. Ok, of course the color isn't really like that, it's intensified a lot, but I have those freaky patterns in my eyes and I like 'em. ^^

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Mr-Muffin [2007-09-16 18:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Who doesn't like wicked eyes? I know I love 'em. Hoho. The poem made me sad though *wipes off a tear*. Hehe. I liked it.

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blackhandruby In reply to Mr-Muffin [2007-09-16 23:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks, dear. It makes me happy when my sad poem makes other people sad and they like it
But as it goes, I think a certain amount of tragedy can still be a beautiful and good thing if it means better understanding for the future! Just beware of the unforgiving...*g*

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Beauty-Of-Being-numb [2007-09-10 19:47:53 +0000 UTC]

"...ouch!" says the blind child!

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blackhandruby In reply to Beauty-Of-Being-numb [2007-09-12 23:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Ouch? I must have a _very_ piercing gaze, then. *pats poor kid*

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Ass-Soul [2007-09-05 05:32:37 +0000 UTC]

Ok... That is REALLY cool.

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blackhandruby In reply to Ass-Soul [2007-09-05 05:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! Your avatar does suggest that you like eyes....Glad you appreciate mine, then! ^^

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Ass-Soul In reply to blackhandruby [2007-09-05 14:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, it certainly does!

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somethingsnotright [2007-09-05 01:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Really pretty <3

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blackhandruby In reply to somethingsnotright [2007-09-05 01:58:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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