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My OC Agent Georgia. I would love feedbackEDIT: I decided to change this and use meme.
Setting: post-revelations
Name: Alexandra Turner (Alex)
Age: 23
Alias: Agent Georgia
Nationality: American
Appearance: Usually clam and free of stress with a goofy smile spread across the face. She's a bit short compared to the rest of the freelancers. She has a burn scar on her ankle and several other battle scars on her: arms, legs and back.
Personality: Georgia is usually very upbeat and optimistic, no matter what the situation is. Many people find her excitable personality obnoxious and inapropriate given her current circumstances. Georgia is also very childish. At times she whines like an annoying thirteen year old or is curious enough to peer down the barrel of a gun. At first glance she seems as though she has the I.Q. of a very stupid first grader, but she is quite intelligent when she needs to be. She also can be VERY moody at times. Even though she’s a bit ditsy and very excitable, when it comes down to it Georgia is a hard-working warrior. She will give anything to protect those she loves and works with. When Georgia is angered her personality completely changes. In her blind furry she will kill without question, even though she dislikes murder. When slightly annoyed she’s armed with an arsenal of insults that can bring a grown man to tears.
Fatal Flaw: never gives a second thought about whose an ally and whose an enemy
Freelancer Story: Georgia could never hold down a job so she turned to the military as an option. At first, she thought she might want to go into the Technological Development branch of the military, but soon found being a soldier was a far better desicion. She joined with the lowest ranks of the military at 18 and worked her way to the point when the higher-ups began to notice her; one of those higher-ups was the Director. She was recruited to Freelancer at age 21. She was a great soldier, but the Director also wanted to recruit her as an expiriment. The expiriment was whether a yonger person would have a better suited mind for an artificial intelligence unit.
Specialization: explosives/distractions
Armour: Mark 6 spartan armor. Dark blue with dark green accents. fairly new.
Armour Enhancements: Georgia’s Armor enhancement is noise cancellation. This means that, for a short amount of time, the helments of enemies within a certain range lose their ability to hear. This works by sending a jamming frequency out that enemy helments recieve. Freelancer had taken precautions with this ability and suited most Freelancer issued helments with the ability to ward the signal off so allies would not be affected by the frequency. Noise Cancellation was chosen for Georgia because she specializes in recon missions. It allows her to splip past the enemy without detection.
AI:Lambda
Preferred Weapons and Fighting Techniques: She prefers stealthy techniques when on most missions. She doesn't have much upperbody strength, but her cordination and speed proves she's realiable in battle. Georgia is grenade happy and loves her combat knife so much that she sleeps with it under her pillow.
Backstory: Grew up in a fine, well-to-do family on Earth. She was an only child, went to school and had friends. She joined the military for financial reasons. her parents are alive, but one is very sick
Fanfiction: I don't have a name yet
Theme Songs: smile like you mean it- the Killers
Quotes: I DIDN'T BURN HIM!
I'd love to hold on to the C4
He killed himself, I just watched
don't say a fucking word
I WILL SMACK YOU WITH A FISH!
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Comments: 20
thatkidfromyoutube [2013-10-24 21:26:08 +0000 UTC]
theta is the trust fragment and Georgia is all ready a freelancer
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Alpha-Fragment-Xi [2011-10-11 21:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Okay, guys and girls, listen up: I'm making a list of ALL of the Freelancers (not just canon, but fanon too, and any repeats that come in). But I need help. If you have any morsel of info about the established Freelancers, please send it to assimilatorflood3@gmail.com. If you have any non-established Freelancers or AI inside your mind, send it. If it's one you just found, great; send it. If it's one you made up, even better; send it. If it's one you just have a slight idea about and want to know if anyone else has said anything about him, her, or it, send it and I'll tell you what others have for that Freelancer. And please, PLEASE ask others to help! There is no way anyone could do this alone. So I ask: please wont you help?
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ProjectXA3 [2011-09-06 18:49:46 +0000 UTC]
Ability: I would've made it just a dampening field around her own armor, cancelling all noise emitted by her armor or anything she does.
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ProjectXA3 [2011-09-03 06:05:44 +0000 UTC]
I have to say, I LOVE this format for people's Freelancer Bios.
One small error: in the last line of her Armor Enhancement, it says "spli pst" instead of "slip past".
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blackpentacle In reply to ProjectXA3 [2011-09-03 06:25:05 +0000 UTC]
Whoops, I can't type XD. Thanks for telling me and for the fave
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ProjectXA3 In reply to blackpentacle [2011-09-04 18:23:20 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I'm just glad to help; I really like that format of Freelancer bio, btw.
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blackpentacle In reply to ProjectXA3 [2011-09-05 06:41:38 +0000 UTC]
[link] this is the meme made by :bushtuckapenguin: so you can always make one toooooooooo
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ProjectXA3 In reply to blackpentacle [2011-09-06 15:26:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for this, it really helped!
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Yme35 [2011-09-01 21:06:05 +0000 UTC]
Love it i used two for bushtuckapenguins Agent Michigan and Agent- hm... i dont remember the next one.
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blackpentacle In reply to Yme35 [2011-09-03 06:27:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, and I believe your other OC was agent Sarah
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Bushtuckapenguin [2011-08-10 03:41:46 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Much better detail, love it the bio and the layout.
Critwise, if this takes place after Revelations you may want to age her up because I've calculated the minimum age a Freelancer can be is twenty six ( 18 years is the minimum recruitment age + Minimum 1year for Project Freelancer + 5 in Blood Gulch Chronicles + 1.5 years at the start of Reconstruction + 6 months for Recreation) Personality wise, while the details is great you might want to make the wording more definite, otherwise it sounds flip floppy. This is how she will react in most circumstances, anything else is just the exception that tests the rule. Also it's nice to throw in some imagery and hyperbole because this is the RvB universe
eg Georgia is upbeat and optimistic no matter what the situation is or 'It also means at first glance she has the I.Q of a stunned mullet so that other Freelancers have given her a reputation for lightning wit, 'a swift flash of inspiration that rarely strikes twice'. In fact fast thinking makes her flustered but if given time to slow down and think things out her innate intelligence comes to light.
Otherwise a will rounded character whom I'd like to see more of on Devart!
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blackpentacle In reply to Bushtuckapenguin [2011-08-10 06:49:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for helping me make Georgia a great OC. I'll make the other changes soon
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15thelegend [2011-08-09 07:35:57 +0000 UTC]
lol love the qoutes XD overall awsome character
a.i zigiamea: great another child to screw things up"
agent ken: zig shut up i just hope she knows how to blow things up"
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blackpentacle In reply to 15thelegend [2011-08-09 20:54:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks and she most certainly knows how to blow things up
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15thelegend In reply to blackpentacle [2011-08-09 23:08:41 +0000 UTC]
lol
agent kne: good then we well get along fine welcome to the team"
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Bushtuckapenguin [2011-08-07 23:17:25 +0000 UTC]
It's not bad but I question how she began in Project Freelancer. It's a top secret military project, the last thing you want is a fifteen year old hovering around the base. I really like Lambda's origin story.
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blackpentacle In reply to Bushtuckapenguin [2011-08-08 03:56:15 +0000 UTC]
Good point. The character and her backstory still needs some work so I put it on DA for suggestions, if there is anything else thats odd please let me know I can make Georgia as awesome as possible
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Bushtuckapenguin In reply to blackpentacle [2011-08-08 04:02:44 +0000 UTC]
I think she's pretty good but if you're looking for some organisation I've done this meme [link] and some have gone into fantastic detail. paganistic and CaptainFriedaTimber have done the best I think.
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blackpentacle In reply to Bushtuckapenguin [2011-08-08 04:06:39 +0000 UTC]
If I use the meme should I link the final product in the comments?
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Bushtuckapenguin In reply to blackpentacle [2011-08-08 04:07:34 +0000 UTC]
That would be fantastic!
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