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Published: 2013-02-19 17:42:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1492; Favourites: 101; Downloads: 12
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the second flat color request done yesterday in a join.me session. this handsome panther guy is Redtail owned by ~Batsong , hugging a little plushie of *Sparrow-puff 's sona Sparrow <3 it was a real pleaure drawing them, and I'm happy with how they came out. though looking at it now, I think Red's hind feet are too big...once again, thanks to everyone who watched me draw it!
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Nienilovescats [2013-04-22 13:23:43 +0000 UTC]
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uhuhuhuhum,.. this is a drawing with some really good lineart i think, just look at those straight lines!
I also think there really is an emotion in the way it holds his toy.
the colours are great together but the toy (how ever you call it )
could be a little bit darker i had to look 2 times to see the detaills of it.
otherwise it's an beautyfull drawing with an great lineart and beautyfull colours! beautyfull blackunia!
I hope this was an great critique! i hope all artist think this was fear!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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blackunia In reply to Nienilovescats [2013-04-22 16:18:15 +0000 UTC]
the plushie's colors weren't picked my me but the commissioner, so it wasn't up to me really to make them clearer ^^
thanks a lot for the feedback!
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lazulily [2013-02-20 02:18:04 +0000 UTC]
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(This is my first critique, so I'm gonna try my best.)
I admire this drawing for it's coloring and details, even thought it may look a bit like a lioness instead of a cat. I like the chosen colors and where you placed them on Redtail. Even though the hind paws may look a little big, I still love this. I'd prefer if you had made it look less like a panther, but it still looks great. Anyway, the technique is great and the drawing style is phenomenal. The visual is very clear and the originality is very nice. Great job blackunia.
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blackunia In reply to lazulily [2013-02-20 12:07:51 +0000 UTC]
but... it IS a panther actually xD
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lazulily In reply to blackunia [2013-02-20 22:17:05 +0000 UTC]
Oooooohhh... whoops. XD
Sorry, I got confused. Thanks for telling me, though.
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blackunia In reply to PonyVitany [2014-05-20 09:42:56 +0000 UTC]
how am I supposed to understand it? |D
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PonyVitany In reply to blackunia [2014-05-20 13:04:46 +0000 UTC]
:"D
ΠΠ½Π° Π²Π΅Π»ΠΈΠΊΠΎΠ»Π΅ΠΏΠ½ΠΎ Π½Π°ΡΠΈΡΠΎΠ²Π°Π½Π°! :3
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blackunia In reply to PonyVitany [2014-05-20 13:37:24 +0000 UTC]
stop it please, don't expect me to know Russian >.>'
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PonyVitany In reply to blackunia [2014-05-20 15:04:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh, sorry, I wanted to say that you are great painters! :3
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KidVsKatLoved [2013-11-17 17:54:49 +0000 UTC]
I don't work with large cats, don't know why so don't ask, but I was reading other comments and they called Redtail a female. I agree with you saying the eyes look more feminine. Maybe make the end points more round? To me it would look more male, but that's me (i didn't think this needed to be a crit. XD)
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blackunia In reply to KidVsKatLoved [2013-11-18 14:17:37 +0000 UTC]
frankly speaking- I can't be bothered to fix those eyes xD hahah I agree making the eyelashes less defined would make them less fenminine, but generally I think they look fine
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Nienilovescats [2013-04-22 13:24:15 +0000 UTC]
this is the first drawing i gave an critique!
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blackunia In reply to Nienilovescats [2013-04-22 15:54:05 +0000 UTC]
yay, I feel special! <3
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Nienilovescats In reply to blackunia [2013-04-23 13:34:53 +0000 UTC]
hahaha xd nobody can make you feel like that, we all are
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Raven-The-Kitteh [2013-02-25 01:27:52 +0000 UTC]
This is so cute!
Although it does look a bit like a lioness.
I hope I didn't offend you.
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blackunia In reply to Raven-The-Kitteh [2013-02-25 11:01:59 +0000 UTC]
sure not the eye do look too feminine even for my liking
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SnowBumbee [2013-02-22 11:35:03 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful ! This picture is so amazing, I really love Redtail's expression, she is a really nice character ! ^^
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blackunia In reply to SnowBumbee [2013-02-22 18:50:02 +0000 UTC]
he's male actually, I just made his eyes too... feminine, I guess? :3
thanks anyway
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SnowBumbee In reply to blackunia [2013-02-26 10:39:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh sorry, but now that you telling me it's a male, I see it ! You're right, it's maybe the eyes, but he's still perfect ! ^^
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blackunia In reply to strawberrycorgi [2013-02-20 12:09:18 +0000 UTC]
I know! :3 thanks for being there with me!
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bunnysmooches [2013-02-19 18:27:41 +0000 UTC]
Te wielkie Εapki, takie... uroczo wielkie <3
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blackunia In reply to bunnysmooches [2013-02-19 18:48:41 +0000 UTC]
hahah, jednak chyba aΕΌ za xD
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Batsong [2013-02-19 18:07:20 +0000 UTC]
I still can't get over just how adorable this is<33 Thanks again<33
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blackunia In reply to Kainaa [2013-02-19 18:07:23 +0000 UTC]
it's a male actually xD anyways, thanks a lot!
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