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Published: 2008-08-20 19:31:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description                                                         Faith
                                                     dangling
                                             on a solitary strand
                                             of gossamer thread
                                              its fate determined
                                                  by one factor:
                                                  does she Live
                                                       or Die?

Live
and Faith may be restored
maybe there is something
that looks after those in need
and saves the good at heart
from their suffering

                                                                                                                              Die
                                                                                         and all Faith goes with her
                                                                                           nothing good could kill off
                                                                                            someone so undeserving
                                                                                          with so much more to give

                                                      so it hangs
                                                     precariously
                                                    in the balance
                                            between Life and Death
                                              awaiting the moment
                                        when it is safely reeled back in
                                               or cast away forever
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Comments: 8

Tige321 [2008-09-28 13:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh,oh,oh! Yes! *applauds*

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blameXmyself In reply to Tige321 [2008-09-28 17:37:40 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks :]

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MutePoetess [2008-08-21 01:34:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, Jelly this is brilliant, I love it!

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blameXmyself In reply to MutePoetess [2008-08-21 02:47:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Cassie :]

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MutePoetess In reply to blameXmyself [2008-08-21 20:16:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome =]

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tinyplaidninja [2008-08-20 23:19:23 +0000 UTC]

i like the way you formatted it so it's all...balance-y. yeah. and i think i like the first few lines the best. yay for jelly! <3

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blameXmyself In reply to tinyplaidninja [2008-08-20 23:44:32 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks ambie :]

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tinyplaidninja In reply to blameXmyself [2008-08-21 04:26:45 +0000 UTC]

lol welcome jelly :3

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