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blameXmyself — Blood and Tears
Published: 2008-06-01 02:48:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 66; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I realizeThat ‘thank you’ is no longer enough
It will never make up
For the blood and the tears
You’ve seen me shed
You never complain
Just comfort
‘Everything will be okay’
I want to believe you
I really do
But we both know
You’ll never change me
Not for lack of trying
For lack of material
I’m hard to work with
Dry and brittle
Unkind and uncaring
Yet you still come when I cry
Hugs and whispers
Tissues and band-aids
These are your weapons
‘Everything will be okay’
You kill me with kindness
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Comments: 6
I really like the second verse, I know people like that, the kind that just always says "It's going to be ok?" and you want to look at them and be like, "How do you know?" Or at least that's what I want to say..
I also really like
"Hugs and whispers
Tissues and band-aids
These are your weapons"
cause I'm getting this superhero image of a person in a leotard with tissues and bandaids on a belt at his/her waist, is very funny.
Very deep and emotional poem, good job
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haha i love your superhero image
its not so much what its really like, but funny all the same
thanks :]
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oh, yeah I was pretty sure that wasn't what you were going for lol but it was funny.
you're welcome =]
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IT SUCKS! how dare you post something you wrote in 2 minutes?
JK.
i like it! i think the third stanza's my favorite, and i really like how you end it.
yay for joelle!
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thanx ambie :]
ya i wrote it so fast cuz it was a flash of inspiration
twas exciting
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nice nice.
i love those. they really are exciting.
you get something and then you have to write it down before you lose it.
and you're welcome, of course.
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